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for Green-Eyed Monster

by Lunarwench

person arya
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
absolutely LOVED it! I loved yuki... though it would have been even better if a scene was added at the end of the fic where yuki punishes shuichi after finding out about how shuichi tried to make him jealous. But i did love the ending, because even the thought that shuichi would even think about leaving yuki is absurd. anyway, keep up the good work! I would be very happy if you could make a sequel where this time it's shuichi that get's jealous, because this guy is hitting on yuki...and then where shuichi becomes a pushy uke.
person rose
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really good, and really hot. I love these two boys a lot, and I think that is the exact way that Yuki would react to being jealous. Thank you for sharing such a hot story, I'm off to read more of your work!
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That. Was. Brilliant! I didn't even think that Shuichi was playing Yuki! And the lemon was just fantastic! I'm glad you gave poor Jerry a potential someone there at the end.
person AlphaOmegaPsi
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You, my friend, are a genius. This story was absolutely brilliant. I can imagine Yuki getting jealous over that, since we all know that his attitude towards Shuichi is all a facade. Great story, really.
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good characterization. Love, love, love JealousYuki. Thanks
person drake220
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice! and the spanking scene was good but that phone call- Hah! i loved it!!
person NettChan
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHOA! NICE!!! Absolutly loved the unadulterated HOTNESS! & Yay, even Jerry gets a happy ending ^_^
person Viriginia
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I don't often write reviews, I admit (especially not on aff) but your story was just so amazing! I have to say- you're a great author and I hope to read more from you.
person mamarita
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was perfect!!! I love the way you added that little twist in there(although I kind of saw something coming). This story makes me giggle.. I'd love to read another of your stories.

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