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A very interesting piece, good job. It would be nice to see this as a full story, looks very promising.

Hi me again! sorry if this annoys you but I was wondering it was alright that I make another request (you don't have to do it) Lelouch/Sayako would be the pairing I was thinking of since she seems to get so little love.

I'm surprised (and a little disappointed) to find the Code Geass section so small, but reading your story was definitely a bright side. I agree with some of the others that a continuation of this fic would be great ^_^ ...also seeing how there's a lot of incest stories in this category, reading a Cornelia/Euphemia fic would be interesting.

Not bad, it needs work but still nice. If you don't mind I would like to request a Lelouch/Euphie one, you could place it when they were all on the island in Season 1.

[Gone was the posh clothing, a simple black sweater clinging to her frame, a pair of jeans on her legs, which gave her the image of just a regular britannian, making her give a sigh, as she mentally began to prepare for a trip to the city, to live a little bit. She was a woman first and foremost, not the battle-hardened commander of Area 11, which would make it a bit harder for herself to make her appearance in the nightlife, since nobody knew where the assassins might be lurking, but still, she had the ability to make herself totally unnoticed, her hair color a bit odd, but still, with the right kit, one could do anything, a few hair clips in her hair to mask her normal hairstyle, making her look slightly more anonymous to the crowd, the hair being put into a ponytail to make her look radically different, a worn coat over her back, and she muttered something to herself as she began to slowly make he way towards the door, only to see it slide open and her younger sister appear through it.]

That has got to be the longest sentence I have ever seen. This entire story is full of similar bits of poor grammar and spelling. The plot seems a bit strange as well, almost middle school-ish. I'm not impressed.

Pretty well written, and I have to thank you for bringing M/F to this section. Although, the ending seems rushed, and a oneshot seems like a waste of this story's potential. Making it into a series would defenitely be epic, just think about the possibilites.

I didn't think that you would do a story for code geass but now that you did I have to say that it was amazing. Doing another one would be a nice.