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Fucking fun so far!  I love it and look forward to reading more.  Very hot!

At first when I read the whole "breasts become gigantic" I was disappointed because the characters are perfect the way they are. Changing their appearance is just dumb as it destroys who the are. Also, how is super huge tits sexy? Anyway reading through the chapters we finally arrived at what I was waiting for. Kunou. HELL YES! >>>The figure turned around to face Kuno but it was not the person he thought he was addressing. >>>Instead it was the petite, beautiful, curvaceous, red-haired form of his other beloved, the pig tailed girl. So far so good. >>>>She too had been endowed with a larger bosom than she had before. Depressing yes. >>>>> Her beautiful dark brown eyes Umm wut?? Since when was her eyes brown? If we go by the manga then her eyes would likely be black as all Japanese but then her hair would also have been black. However since you have already established that her hair is red, then her eyes should be blue. >>>>>Her soaked pants also clung to her body showing off her curvy hips. Actually, Ranma doesn't have that curvy hips. The idea seems to stem from that idiotic hip/Toofu episode, but when Ranma is drawn she never had all that wide hips and was always shown to be rather slim hipped. It was just that her upper body was fairly small and she had strong thighs. Her butt was also always shown and drawn as fairly small and firm. The only thing that make her body look wide-hipped is her large head and small stature. >>>>>The pig tailed girl looked at him and smiled lustfully. I know Ranma is supposed to be horny, but if you want this to be Ranma you should give each girl their own type of homeyness that mirror their real personalities. Akane for instance should be an angry type of sex girl -- something you failed at showing. Kasumi and Nabiki however were done fairly well I guess?? But your Ranma isn't. Ranma if she really wanted sex wouldn't be sultry and sexy. When she wants food etc she uses seduction, but if you look at how she acts when she really tried to confess to Akane or had to deal with sexual stuff -- she was actually pretty idiotic and innocent. As such A female Ranma wouldn't act sexy. No -- Her eyes would go wide and she would get a determined look on her face. Then she would simply march up to Kunou and start pulling at his pants. This would shock Kunou of course and he would believe she would be under some type of spell. Ensuing a lot of misunderstandings where it would be Ranma that would try to go after Kunou, while Kunou would try to be romantic. But in the manga Kunou did try to jump her when in the furro you say. Yes he did, but that was when she called out for him seductively. A "take charge Ranma" would more than likely just have the opposite effect... Kunou is too much of a take charge guy for him to be able to react to aggressive sexual females. >>>>“Oh don’t call me that. You can just call me Ranko,” And now my boner died. No seriously, stop calling female Ranma the name Ranko. It is a shitty fanoin name that the female Ranma only used to hide from her mother. Only reason it became "Ranko" was because she was bad at coming up with names and just called herself something that sounded almost like her real name. That name however isn't something she would call herself when dealing with anyone else. Going by the type of girl Ranma is, she would have called herself something dumb based on the situation. Maybe a name that meant "sex" or "horny" and then added "ko" at the end of it. But much more likely, if she cared (which I doubt since she just wanted to jump Kunou's bones) She would have used her real name, and Kunou wouldn't have batted an eyelid because he already heard before that her name was Ranma Saotome... in fact he has it written down in a notebook. But ugh... then you have her go after that disgusting Gosenkugi. Dude, there was no need to have Ranma run aroudn school fucking other boys. If you wanted more sex scenes you should just had Ukyou walk around school in search of Ranma. Ranma would have hidden with Kunou in a closed with Tatewaki pumping her from behind... and then they would have seen some other guys, maybe Gosenkugi? Or maybe Daisuke and Hiroshi start fucking Ukyo... they would have seen this from the closet and Ranma would have grumbled angrily about it complaining how her friends were fucking around. THAT would have been Ranmaesque writing. But nope, you just went for the easy stuff.

Dude, your anime works are freaking hot. Nice work, please get back to them.

Great new chapter

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I look forward to the next chapter thanks for updating oh and its interesting

Great story thus far! I'd personally like it if you did Kodachi next, but whatever you do, I'm certain that it will good. Here's to the next update hopefully not taking as long to get out; The suspense of not knowing wheter or not the story had been abandoned was killing me.

Keep up the good work.

At last a new chapter it was Fucking great I loved every second of it and really hope the next chapter wont take so long to be posted.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

This is really hot. I wonder what effect this is going to have on Ranma's guy side...