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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, scary! That lullaby coming from B was just too creepy.
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May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter flowed much better then the last. There were a few parts that should have be spaced, different people talking. There are one or two places where I think lines should have been a new sentence or atleast a coma used, but it was still great.
You have taken this in a different direction then I thought, but it is a wonderful idea. I look forward to reading the rest, don't stop. And if you need anyone second opinion on something let me know.
One question though. How much time has passed?
You have taken this in a different direction then I thought, but it is a wonderful idea. I look forward to reading the rest, don't stop. And if you need anyone second opinion on something let me know.
One question though. How much time has passed?
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May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you updated. Once or twice I got confused with who was talking, L or B....but that be because I am half alseep here. I would have liked to see a little more detail in a few parts, but other then that I am looking forward to reading more.
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So many love triangles. So happy to see another chapter. Keep up the great work. Loving it. ^_^
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the part with A. Something more to come perhaps? Keep the BB fics coming.
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for explaining Matt to me. I remember him now in the Death Note episodes. He didn't have a very large part so I kind of didn't pay too much attention to him. I also think he looks hot as a red head.
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to reading more. Well done, update soon.
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CRAZY! Poor Matt. I wouldn't want to be at the recieving end of one of Beyond's perfect crime ploys. I hope L finds him in time. This story is very interesting! Please continue! GO L !!!
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Some don't know who Beyond is yet, but I think you've done great on the characters so far. Matt's so young and innocent, I hope Beyond doesn't damage him physically or mentally. Great job thus far.
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's like you knew I just finished reading Another Note about five minutes ago! xD
Great so far! Can't wait for you to continue!
Great so far! Can't wait for you to continue!