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I thought it looked like an interesting premise from the summary, but lo! It was TERRIBLE! Random POV changes, tense changes mid-sentence, the works! I could barely get through the first paragraph without retching. You disgust me. If English is not your first language, then why are you writing in it? You should write in your native language, and not bother us English speakers with crap like this. If you ARE a native English speaker, then let me say this: SHAME ON YOU! I can think of only two reasons for an nEs to write this badly. 1) you haven't finished the fifth grade yet, and are thus either too young or too stupid to be writing anything other than your name, or, 2) you like torturing us. No matter what the reason, there is no excuse for crap like this, and I fully expect it to be either re-worked, with an included apology, or taken down.
Once again, you disgust me.

I wondered what happened to this story and all your 'others'. You used to be called Lady Mystra am I right? I hope you continue with this one aswell as your other ones too. Please write more I missed your stories.