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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! That was hot. Loved the story line.
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that's totally in character and cute. I really liked the style too.
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and the fact that you didn't have Eiri leave- which I knew wouldn't happen. DLS
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this. i thought it was funny (that "but we are gay line'- i could make an entire fic around that one line. hysterical observation.)
at one point in the story you wrote,"When had he become so independent?"- i think you meant 'dependant'. just thought you'd like to know if you wanted to go and fix it.
at one point in the story you wrote,"When had he become so independent?"- i think you meant 'dependant'. just thought you'd like to know if you wanted to go and fix it.