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for When I\'m Seventeen

by soapywater

schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nifty. Not too many good Loveless stories here, but I liked this one. Phone sex with Soubi huh? *grins* Yeah, I could get into that.
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hot but Ritsuka needs to turn 17 and you need to write it...hint hint...nudge...nudge ^_^ please
person UkeUsagi
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooo great story~! It was so cute and funny.
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehehe, smart RItsuka, discovering the loop hole!

I think you could have done more with this, though. I would have liked to see more detail in how Ritsuka touched Soubi, and what Ritsuka was feeling and thinking while doing this. It happened a bit fast and rushed; I wished to have more time to enjoy it.

I love the idea though, of RItsuka decided to do things to Soubi, and Soubi being by his rules unable to do anything back. Hot stuff!
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I still agree with my gushing review oh-so-long ago about this chapter 2, "Interlude."

PLEASE write more! I want the actual "when RItsuka is seventeen"!!! It's going to be SO hot, since the phone sex alone was so amazing. :D More! MORE! PLEASE!!
person Utopia
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the first Loveless fic I've ever read; and I think I might be hooked.

10/10
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Again again! More More! ~<3
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:DDDDDDDDDDDDDD OMG this is wondrous! I love it! It's so fucking hot! Who knew phone sex could be so hot? I didn't! Damn, now I sortof want to try it. Wow. Wow.

At first the "you" part threw me off, but then I just got into it and imagined as Ritsuka was imagining, and wow. Oh, Soubi's descriptions are amazing. SO fucking hot. My god. I love Ritsuka's little sounds, and especially the faint whimper as he really starts getting into it.

Soubi's restraint is amazing. I love Soubi's humor and laughter in this fic. It's adorable. The man is so gorgeous. I love how he taped it, that made me laugh a ton, as did the "well...I could give you a preview" part. XD

LOVE THIS FIC!!! AAAAH! Now I want to go write some Loveless fanfiction with these two...
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely loving your story thus far! ^^
Awww.... Poor Ritsuka having to wait that long when he is... in need. lol!
I can't wait until you post up the new chapter!

~Eqlipse

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