rate_review Reviews

Well written! But...sad *sigh* something about this pairing really gets to me *sniffles*

Really nice story, the ending is very strong and unexpected, brilliant I would say.
I feel bad for your L, dead inside... it fits with how you portrayed him perfectly, even though if I have to think about the original story I would believe Light to be the dead one after a while, because he really cares for no one and destroys all his relationship one at a time ^^
The story made sense though, because after all one can interpret the character as they wishes, plus, it's fiction.. so yeah, very good work~

This was simply brilliant *claps* I usually hate first person but it was very effective in this story. I really fell like you got into Light's mind. The thoughts felt so real, like the mind of a brilliant person. loved this ;) 10/10

RM~

I find myself frequently searching for some Death Note FanFic , especially fics true to the characters L and Light because without it being written in the manga or seen in the anime i feel they both have complex emotions and I ADORE THEM. Death has wonderful character development and its so difficult to find fanfic that holds true to what i felt as i watched L and Light. Your story was short but beautifully written. I could really see Light, with his large ego and inquisitive mind thinking that way. not the "oh L you so sexy lets get in on" that a lot of the stories go towards. i love the subtle ties into the original story and most of all L's reaction. i felt it could have really happened in the story and thats my favorite in fanfics. so, i commend thee. i would love to read more from you. especially L/Light
Wonderful Job.

Wow...

That was really amazing, it had an almost... poetic/metaphorical meaning behind it.
That was a brilliant piece of prose, and I ADORED the end.
Wow, that was simply brilliant. Gives you something to think about hey?

It was inspired by boredom, and inspires nothing more.
Dry, undetailed erotica punctuated by over-blown character introspective that leads to nothing. The reader feels a build of emotions that leads to a depressing and meaningless ending.
Not worth my five minutes of time. Why even bother?

boredom is a brilliant thing if it inspired you to write this! its amazing and the 1st person thing was done really well. there was a sense of tension throughout - i loved it!

I am at a loss of words. That was wonderfully written. The descriptions, the words everything. It was just simply beautiful. Brava! ^.-

Good lord, that was beautiful. Bleak and dark and gorgeous. I love the simplicity of the style you used, and the pattern of the sentences that made it all flow together as one complete piece. The structure of your writing is impeccable and intelligent and wonderfully emotional. I really loved reading this. I could feel Light's fascination and apprehension, and his disappointment as I read through it. You make the reader feel exactly what he feels, and it's a rare thing to see it taken to such a good and eloquent level. The emotions and reactions stood out so well, and it was a very captivating read.

This was wonderfully done, especially for being your first adult scene. I really loved it, and I look forward to reading more from you in the future. To put it plainly, I was fascinated. *wink wink*

Thanks soooo much! It was a great story, and a nice break from the completely OOC Yaoi that you find everywhere else. Keep writing.^-^