rate_review Reviews

Wow. I mean, wow. The writing was completely engaging, I couldn't look away even when my phone was ringing. I would love to read more from you.

Joie,
Gloria

very well-written, i'm impressed. such realistic portrayals of L an light are really rare these days, and after
endless OOCs and witless plots, stumbling over this was a much needed reminder of how great these two characters actually are.

I rated your story a full five out of five, concerning myself with the content. The content is wonderful and well laid out. Writing wise, however, I have a few gripes: you occasionally use the wrong form of a word (such as You're versus your) and I feel that you say "Ryuuzaki" a little too much =) Otherwise, awesome. Great ending lines, too.

This was beautifully written. I can see Light being interested in L but losing interest once he discovers there is nothing about L that is human. Congrats on your first sexual piece, I thought it was wonderful.

This was good, yet sad, prob because it's most likely true that L is a puppet? A walking brain... *cuddles her vast expanse of L things* I still lovers him... And for first person you did well I think n_n

Completely sad, but exquisitely written. I quite enjoyed this, especially the part where Light thinks something along the lines of 'did you not see that this was inevitable in coming? Nevermind.' Wonderful job.