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please continue- I've never read anything like this before---- its great!

love near as seme--- its adorable--- i love the situation you put them in-- :D poor light!!!!!

No- dont stop there. It was just getting interesting! ^^ you seem to be doing a good job at Near and Matt's characters, but i've never really paid much attention to them, so you could have them juggling hippos and i wouldnt know anything was off ^^ Anywho, looking forward to the next chapter!

OMG that was AWESOME! Continue, please!

Well, it's not particularly good, but it's not particularly bad, either. I'd appreciate an explanation for why Matt's still alive. Not that I mind it at all, because he is one of my favorites. I just want to know why he's not dead, since it's clear Mello is, and Matt died before him. I'd also like to know how Raito knows his name. Maybe I'm misremembering, but I'm not entirely sure Raito was aware of Matt's existence, beyond the fact that Mello had someone helping him.

Near having sex with anyone kind of weirds me out in general, so I can't comment on whether that was any good or not. And you've already admitted to OOCness, so I don't need to point that out.

So, mainly, I'm just reading this because I need more non-con uke!Raito. Because it's fun to take control away from someone with a God-Complex. XD

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Wow I really like this. You must continue please!! It's really good.. ^_^

Continue!

MORE MORE! XDDD

Awesome story. I hope you write more. I love the idea of Near having Light as a toy.
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Squeee, wow 1st time I've seen these pairings and written so interestingly too! You must definately write more!