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for The Fine Line

by Darklingserenity

person KittyLynn
schedule January 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter! :3 As soon as I finished, I had to stop and do a quick sketch of something that popped into my head. So happy... thanks for the inspiration! Lemme know if u wanna see. (^o^)
person Michiyo Ichimaru
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eh~ I waited until the end to review this and tell you what I think, but I'm really sorry i did, seeing how few reviews this story has recieved despite being incredibly awesome.

Your characterization is amazing, where most stories seem to fall short, yours had the right tension, and building of a relationship. And your OCs are actually likable, although I usually don't like them. Sable is a very likable character, and unlike most OCs, she's important to the relationships and moves the plot and affects the characters.

So, I LOVE this story and really hope you'll continue it soon. I'm interested in seeing this final encounter between Tyki and Lavi and how it works out. (^_^)~<33

Much love,
Michi
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY, lol please update soon i cant wait to see what is gonna hapen next love it^^
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, I love this story!

Its so cute but some how STILL in-character, you know how many people manage to screw that up?!
Oh and thanks for not making Allen so girly, thats one of my MANY peeves about Yullen fics...

You have to update soon!! I can't wait to read more!
I have to tell my other Yullen friends about this~
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
W-wait, I'm the only reviewer?!
FOR SHAME!

This fic deserves SO much more than that!

I'll spam you with love, my dear~
:hugs:
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your OCs~ They usually piss me off to the point of making me abandoning the story.
Sable sounds like a cool girl..

WAIT, THAT REMINDS ME... thats how I found fic and why the title looked so familiar!
The fic "Boys Will Be Boys" she mentions this story so much, no wonder, I love it too!

The way you write Yullen makes it seem so believable, I really wish it happened that way! :sniffles:

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