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for Inexorable Flow

by chayron

person steaxt24
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's been 5 days since i started reading all three novels of yours. and now it has come to an end. it was a good story. i just wished the cliffhanger at the very end (Inexorable Flow) didn't really put me on edge as to saying;

"WHAT THE FUCK! WHERE IS THE NEXT PAGE?! (*seriously pissed [mind you])"
hahaha! you seriously got me.

Well I think I like the third novel more.
Then the first,
Lastly the second...

I don't know, to me the second one seems boring...
I found my self skipping a lot. Which I'm not very used to.
Anyway keep it up! Keep making good stories for us.

My rating:
Working Out The Paradox - 9/10
Watch Out For The Green Eyes - 7/10
Inexorable Flow - 9.7/10

I'm seriously hoping for another sequel
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM

Girl, I'm right there with you, hair done up just so, glasses on to adjust, serious look on my face schooling children about just saying 'no' to urges and playing video games instead. It just vomits me hugely the things I hear on the news. And don't you give me that "why would I fear the end" for you to change your profile it seems pretty pointed lamb, about "cute" and all that enternally yours crap. I'm into reality, not cutey-ooty wootsy spoot bleh! But I will say this, I don't believe in just dropping someone like a worn brick because you've been together for ages and think they're boring now what else is out there. I believe in growing very comfortable together not apart, to no longer need desires like some lesser beings. So whereas I love me the drama I roll my eyes when people treat relationships like the end is near when that spark flies out the door. So that's why I'd be weary of your fourth story, you say its different and I'm thinking bleh more Kyota. I like him, he's great if it were a story about him an Amae I'd read it in a heart beat they're pricelessly funny to watch, its like a gruesome movie that you can't turn away from but if he'd be with Wolfram, I'm already feeling annoyance and wouldn't put myself through it. Friends like him sicken me. Hoo boy that's long, I gotta stop running my mouth, but hey its what I do. By the way I changed my e-mail because that one was having major issues, just wanted to let you know if you might have written back and got the "message return"
schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello!!
Long time no review! Haha!
I am so glad for this story and your first two. Now that I have finally caught up on this one and now finished it, I am not sure whether to be elated that you have kept with this and finished it marvelously, or sad that there will be no more...I think I'll stick with both! :). I have laughed and cried and blushed my way through this adventure and have loved every minute of it!
Thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent with us! I look forward to the day that you may return to us KKMers and wish you the very best on all of your endeavours!

Much love and admiration,

KittenCeez!
xMeowx!
person animekitty421
schedule December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just realized that your Part 10 on this site is missing...any reason or an aff.net goof? Just curious. Happy Holidays!
person SParker
schedule December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yep, I definitely smell a sequel with the way
the epilogue ended, though it truly wasn't
decided between D' & Lakarde if that really
WAS an engagement slap.

Well, let's see what the boys decided...
person animekitty421
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on finishing this fic ^_^ I love the original characters you have created for this series, and your plot twists are always intriguing. I'm impressed with your dedication to finish three super-long fics that are distinctive and unique in plot from any other KKM fics I have read. Thanks so much for sharing this with the comm! And thanks for the awesome sex scenes ~_^
person gcbella
schedule November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
it was a wonderful ending to a awesome story. The perfect way to start my b day
person Ruthaer
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And will it be followed with a sequel? Cause I really love your stories, and would love it if you would write more with these two!
person L. Fantasy
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM

Ahaha, hoo hoo nice ending, although... with the things you think I'm not sure I'm ready for the epilog :-)
I still spit whenever I so much as hear the mention of Kyoto and his definition of friendship with Wolfram, but you don't care about that. I do like him as a person, though. And I'm not surprised he'd married Amae- honestly *lean in* I thought that Amae might be related to him in some way- well I did! I got this odd impression when Amae talked about his past in the story before this one, and the way they kept looking at each other seemed so strange. My mental tv must have been perceiving wrong with the facial expressions. Great story, as always, and I'm excited to see the next one no matter where it may take me.
person alice barber
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm intersted in being a Beta. I am English speaking from the US. While I am not a writer I read alot and would love to be involved in being a beta. If interested please email me.

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