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about #5...

Weeelll...I have to say Wolfram screwed up big time by not sitting down and having
that discussion with Yuuri. Therefore, Yuuri has the right to be angry, BUT...he
is going a wee bit overboard, though I can understand his feelings.

That and the fact his insecurities which is deep in his subconcious is coming into
the forefront or should I just say his green-eyed monster got loose?

As much as I'd like to say that Yuuri should understand Wolfram's position, I wouldn't
want my husband sleeping with some other woman either...thank God for modern
medicine & technology. So, hopefully, once Yuuri calms down he'll be able to see
this from Wolfram's POV, though I suspect Yuuri already does.

Also, WHY is it Yuuri doesn't know these basic stuff yet now that he is older? I mean,
I understand him resisting learning about things when he was a teenager, but the
man is OLDER now, you would think he'd learned something even a child would know.

Pt 5

Yuuri is so mad at Wolfram that he's hit him multiple times, while there is no excuse fo this Wolfram has really set him up. Yuuri needs to learn to control his jelosy and temper. Wolfram needs to be more honest with Yuuri and end all this sneaking around.

God what will happen when Yuuri finds out that Wolfram was raped in the other world? That would make all this drama seem inconsequential compared to thqt blow up.

Great update.

so that what he mean by saying "cheating", honestly i didn't think about that having a heir all of a sudden.
Is Yuuri required to do so, acquire an heir?
I like this plot.
I don't actually remember if it is one of your previous stories but there is one scene where Wolfram ask Shori to find a suitable adoptable son for Yuuri. i think its the first one of your trilogy...
If that's true, what happen on it

Oh. My. Gooood!! since the first chapter, I was, am thinking that Yuuri is 'unstable'. His unstability might lead into some insanity, likes violence for that matter. I know he's upset, but still, beat the shit out of Wolf and then drag him around the castle like a dog as Murata had said? I can't blame him of course.
And Wolf, yeah, he's a coward this time. Instead of trying to talk things, he hides everything and be sneaky. I can't blame him either. With a husband like Yuuri, and Von Bielefeld's descendant, etc etc, that's hard.
I wish that everything would work out well for them.
Keep the good job!

about #4...

WHY do I get the feeling when Yuuri finds out what happened to Wolfram, and he
eventually will, there's going to be a HUGE blowout???

...and Faraya's head on a stake?

Considering who the author is, I wouldn't expect anything less. ;-)
Besides I sense a buildup happening in this story.

I ended up reading this recent chapter like three times trying to decipher the cryptic conversation that Wolfram had with Asami. I was wondering if you could provide a little insight into what Wolfram is feeling right now. I felt like I got the everything about the update: insecurities that Yuuri is feeling & Wolfram's reaction to everything..right until this chapter where based on the conversation, I feel like Wolfram is....*arg* I can't think of the word to describe it...okay. honestly can't think of the words for it....sorry ><

& I am very curious to find out how Yuuri finds out about & react to Faraya x Wolfram. I have a *HUGE* obsession with jealous! Yuuri & your fic is just perfect.

Can't wait until the next update <3

Well that was interesting!
Although I'm not surprised that Wolfram knows that Yuuri thinks he's cheating on him, as Wolf has been around him a long time and Yuuri was never good at hiding things. I'm surprised that he's not telling Yuuri that he isn't.
Guess what happened with Faraya had a deep affect on him.

And poor Asami, I feel so sorry for him! But the handcuffs were worth it!

slow start i thought want to see what else is happening and meet the others love the handcuffs how did yuuri's friend get there he's not from shin makou

Good story. I love it. LOVE, love, LoVe IT!!!

very interesting, you took me by surprice with the cuffs, its not what i had imagined at first, but good none the less. I'm not surpriced the Wolfram knwe whats going on in yuuri's mind, but how has he kept quiet? even if he is not, about to tell him about faraya. i am amazed that he is taking the risck of allowing his marrige to drawl on in danger, after all it took him to get there. It most driving him as crazy as its driving yuuri, he is just better at hiding it. Now yuuri sending Asami to talk to wolfram its weird, and what is asami going to tell yuuri about his conversation with wolfram. What's up with gwendal by the way? Now back to that conversation, oh yeah, when wolf said that yuuri is getting ruthless and was verging on violent, during sex, now you know what that made me think, don't ya, *wink* will ya, will ya! *exited* pretty please tell me there is going to be a "violent" sex scene somewhere in here. It was halerious the way they got rid of Asami, rock paper sissors, i can't belive they actually did that, poor guy, he is always the bottom of their jokes. but he is a nice bloke. well untill next one, ja ne!