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for Inexorable Flow

by chayron

person panda
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Healthy sex life then. That's heavenly hehe
When will Kyota appear? I miss him! I thought after the whole 'ordeal' with Amae, his character development will be interesting :D I love his role.
I wish I had Anissina's invention... that'll be fun! the jan-ken game to decide who's bottom and who's top is hilarious!!
Complex plot ahead I think
person naviarex
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This triology is fantastic. It only gets better and better. Hot damn sex too ;)

I think this part 3 is shaping up to be the best yet. I like how every little psychological detail is tied in and leads to something. The others were good too, but this I particularly like because it is hard (hence more satisfying) to tie in small psychological details rather then plot lines without making it cheezy.
I'll be happy to read more of your story!
Thank you
person SP777
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, after 2 & 1/2 weeks, I finally...FINALLY!...caught up.

I have to say I like it when an author takes it upon themselves to base
two characters in a reality-based situation. It really gives a story some
'bite' and the story goes in places that is limited by the anime.

Seeing Yuuri & Wolfram as a 'real couple' who have problems like any other
couple, while still being in love, definitely gives them a new light.

I like how mature it makes them look and how grown/adult Yuuri is.

Question: have you thought about doing a story with them as teenagers?
person dawnmm
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
getting interesting where are they is the big question. I have my suspicions and am waiting impatiently for the answers though it looks like yuuri is getting closer to questions with answers he really doesnt want to hear. I loved how they twice killed the information guy. But shouldnt some of the others be alive to question. Its so good to see yuuri jealous of Wolfram I bet Wolf will get all weak in the knees and call him wimp when he finds out. as always thanks for sharing
person drinkbydateoncan
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the end of that chapter was just prefect.
person rowen raven
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm speechless in front of yuuri's view, okay so yeah his fears about age are well founded but its going to be a looonnng time before that happens, look at conrard, not even him looked like wolf's dad, and he ages at the same rate the yuuri does. As for dominating, its understandable i guess though i myslef am not that kind of guy, was borned an uke and i love to be dominated, but as a man not as a woman, and i guess thats where we are the same, surrender oneself an still be concidered and treated as a man, thats the only thing wolfram ever asked of yuuri. I guess having been rised as he was has a lot to do with it and it something that can't be really helped. Now as for thinking that wolfram would cheat on him, thats been stupidly dumb, how can he even imagine such a thing its beyond me. oh when he said there had been close calls, i just wanted to smak him myself, and i bet that each and every one of those "close calls" where with women, i can't belive the guy, then he dares think wolf would be capable of doing the same, he is the occation of his own accusations. I can't think of his reaction when he finally finds out what happened to wolf with faraya, and to be perfectly o=honest, i can't wait for it, its going to be one hell of a spat, and a row, and there is going to be so much hurt and angst, and i really hope some one gets hurt *wink* i'm a sadist. Asami for once has showned a sensible side, he is right yuuri should just talk to wolf, oh and he should knock it off with the Kyo thing, its getting old, it was clear that wolf chose him ove kyo many years ago, he should let it rest. Now what surprised me was that Kyo had taken it so hard, after Amae left, he was really affected by it, and I wonder if Amae was affected in a similar way, after all he is the one who left, and him and faraya did loved each other, in a sick twisted kind of way. I loved the trip to the adult store, and i can relate to messed up first times in a way... now cuffs thats an idea, i hope to see a scene in the future involving said cuffs, wolf tied down its a treat, but i'm not sure if he'd let himself be tied down to beging with... now the important matter is who the fuck is this people attacking wolf, are they faraya's? oh well it was a very insightfull chapter, at least as to what yuuri's mind is really like. well ja ne!
person panda
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wah.. Yuuri is so insecure. I wonder how he will deal with it. But I think I can understand that. Having a very hot blonde as a permanent life partner who has so many admirers, not to mention the so-call rivalry feelings (with Kyota),aging issues, and combine with Wolf's own issues as well.

Well, shopping sex toys and then being attacked? Who the hell were they?!

Btw, I've been reading your trilogy all along. I may not write a review but I do enjoy your stories! Good Job!! I hope the next chapter won't take too long like this one!
person chibi
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
'Well, he shouldn’t have tried that'
The line made me laugh!

One thing I love about your stories is the emotions that you put into them. I really feel sorry for Yuuri! He's really scared of Wolfram leaving him.

But I wonder who was sent to hurt Wolfram.

Update soon!
person prima
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
waiting for the next chapter...so who would be their enemy this time...

Reality...is knocking on Yuuri's door...
Hope that Yuuri will solve his turmoil...
person Naoko144
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG How can i be reviewing so late xD (after you posted two chapter xD) I love it when wolf is all drunk! And it sure would have been funny to have him suck yuuri in the bar-restaurant xDD (I am a perv..oh well)

Lol, so far, I can't wait to know what is keeping wolf thinking and all bothered and why does Yuuri is being all 'dark' for? oO You've awakened another lot of question now that I know you'll answer but can't help but think about them x33 (is wolf's torment about faraya?)

Anyway! Yeah for sex scene xD you do them good ^^

Oh, if I guessed right, Asami is going out with that girl right? (don,t remember her name even if I just read it xD... I didn't sawed her enough to xD, sorry^^ goldfish emmory)

Continue with the good work, you write amazingly good x3 oh, and will this sequel be as long as the other? (around 20 chapter?) x3 I like long fic x3 (yours particularly x3)

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