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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
didn't sign im cause was to lazy anyway i love it update soon kay so glad there a sequel cause many things were circling my brain of the green eyes one of what heck cnat end like that and then a sequeal appears and i'm just happy hell. update ^_^
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You write such amazing stories! I started reading the first part of this trilogy about three or four days ago and I absolutely love it! Though there is something I'm confused about... Wolfram mentions something about how "He was good at pretending, though. Even if it was his own husband to whom he was lying. This evening was just a game for Yuuri, just for teasing each other to stoke their passions. The real mess was going to start after they got back to Shin Makoku. Yuuri was going to kill him after he realized what had been happening while the two of them had been absent. There was no way their relationship would survive that unscathed". I'm confused as to what this could be. It might make sense if Wolfram was planning on telling Yuuri what happened with Faraya, but somehow I doubt that is the case. Does Wolfram know that something bad happened and isn't telling Yuuri or is he talking about something bad that he did and is afraid Yuuri will find out when they get back to Shin Makoku?
On another note, you mention in your author's notes and review responses (Yes, I read those too! They give information and clues straight from the author's mouth that attentive readers might ignore.) that you are frustrated by your limited English vocabulary. I would be willing to give you some synonyms and English "slang" phrases for words that you feel you use too often as well as their nuances if you would like. I'm a native American English speaker though, so anything like that would be something said by an American. Just e-mail me if the idea interests you.
Thank you for writing such a complex storyline. I'm always ecstatic about finding authors that don't rush their plots, and you are one of the VERY few that I've found. You've also written one of the longest fanfics I've ever read, but I don't mind! *smiles* It gives me more time to appreciate the psychology behind the characters!
On another note, you mention in your author's notes and review responses (Yes, I read those too! They give information and clues straight from the author's mouth that attentive readers might ignore.) that you are frustrated by your limited English vocabulary. I would be willing to give you some synonyms and English "slang" phrases for words that you feel you use too often as well as their nuances if you would like. I'm a native American English speaker though, so anything like that would be something said by an American. Just e-mail me if the idea interests you.
Thank you for writing such a complex storyline. I'm always ecstatic about finding authors that don't rush their plots, and you are one of the VERY few that I've found. You've also written one of the longest fanfics I've ever read, but I don't mind! *smiles* It gives me more time to appreciate the psychology behind the characters!
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like that yuuri is the jealous one right now and the fact that he is starting to look older than wolfram is really well done. the intrigueing thing though is what is happening in shin makou while they are away?
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while since I've been able to read something. And I'm glad it was one of yours! I miss reading your stuff. Glad to be back and I can't wait for your next update.
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WTF! my review was lost!!! now i have to type it again, which gives me the oportunity to write what was left out in the prior one, so you knon me by now, this is going to be long so get comfy and cheers! OMG!! up till now this is the best chapter of this story, it was filled with a variety of themes and scenarios, which made it just balanced and great.
First there was the way youexposed the psycology of their relationship, which is very real. I've been in a relationship for 7 years now and it goes more or less like what you've described here. I just get so 'irked' when he gets all protective of me, when i'm quite capable of taking care of my own sorry ass. I'm very concious of this and don't do it to him like ma he has pride in being a capable independant and relaible man, i expectim to be as independant as me in that aspect (is that bad?). He gets all jealous over all kinds of stupid things too, but i guess its in his nature, I'm not the jealous type myself (or maybe i'm an overconfident fool). There are dominating issues, but mostly the oposite, its funny, in our case we are both too meek,Him probably cause he sees me as frail *rolls eyes* and me cause i'm the submisive kind, its in my nature, and we both whish the other would be a bit more dominant, agresive, idon't know, thats not what i was supose to write, sorry, but its just as fucked up at both parts being so powerfully dominat, like yuuri and wolfram.
Back to the story, umm, oh yeah the spats, and I most say I LOVED it, that was one hell of a row, I loved and liked all of it, from the shouting and curseing to the threats and physical violence, it was ver satisfying, i trive from the drama and angst and tention. Their anger and fears are so human, it makes their relationship all the more real. I hope they have a few more of those spats, and it sounds fucked up, but as much if not more than the sex scenes, i enjoy them more arguments are welcome as long as they resolve the issue in given time and specially if they end up with rabid monkey sex, no one can stay mad forever right?!!*wink*
And last but not least the sex scene!!! as always it was great, on the kitchen table that was so hot and intense, and flashing the neightboors, i just had to laugh at that one, it was so plausible and mundane that it made it all the more naturaly real, and normal. You've manage the present a reallife relationship and its brillinat.
What has me intrigued is this new dark something wolfram is sensing in yuuri, i just hope it doesn't bouts ill for wolfram, whatever it is. Hmmnn, Amae and Kyota... is there is till a chance for them, in my opinion they are too fucked up, but then again maybe thats what makes them so fit for each other, 'takes one to know one' or so they say.
I look foward to all that you've promise to come and every twist and turn up ahead, i'm with you all the way again, ja ne!
ps. of curse i noticed they are a different wolf anf yuuri, they have grown and lenghty years in a relationship can do that to both parties, take it from me, specialy if one has dark secrets and fears as wolfram does, bye ^^.
First there was the way youexposed the psycology of their relationship, which is very real. I've been in a relationship for 7 years now and it goes more or less like what you've described here. I just get so 'irked' when he gets all protective of me, when i'm quite capable of taking care of my own sorry ass. I'm very concious of this and don't do it to him like ma he has pride in being a capable independant and relaible man, i expectim to be as independant as me in that aspect (is that bad?). He gets all jealous over all kinds of stupid things too, but i guess its in his nature, I'm not the jealous type myself (or maybe i'm an overconfident fool). There are dominating issues, but mostly the oposite, its funny, in our case we are both too meek,Him probably cause he sees me as frail *rolls eyes* and me cause i'm the submisive kind, its in my nature, and we both whish the other would be a bit more dominant, agresive, idon't know, thats not what i was supose to write, sorry, but its just as fucked up at both parts being so powerfully dominat, like yuuri and wolfram.
Back to the story, umm, oh yeah the spats, and I most say I LOVED it, that was one hell of a row, I loved and liked all of it, from the shouting and curseing to the threats and physical violence, it was ver satisfying, i trive from the drama and angst and tention. Their anger and fears are so human, it makes their relationship all the more real. I hope they have a few more of those spats, and it sounds fucked up, but as much if not more than the sex scenes, i enjoy them more arguments are welcome as long as they resolve the issue in given time and specially if they end up with rabid monkey sex, no one can stay mad forever right?!!*wink*
And last but not least the sex scene!!! as always it was great, on the kitchen table that was so hot and intense, and flashing the neightboors, i just had to laugh at that one, it was so plausible and mundane that it made it all the more naturaly real, and normal. You've manage the present a reallife relationship and its brillinat.
What has me intrigued is this new dark something wolfram is sensing in yuuri, i just hope it doesn't bouts ill for wolfram, whatever it is. Hmmnn, Amae and Kyota... is there is till a chance for them, in my opinion they are too fucked up, but then again maybe thats what makes them so fit for each other, 'takes one to know one' or so they say.
I look foward to all that you've promise to come and every twist and turn up ahead, i'm with you all the way again, ja ne!
ps. of curse i noticed they are a different wolf anf yuuri, they have grown and lenghty years in a relationship can do that to both parties, take it from me, specialy if one has dark secrets and fears as wolfram does, bye ^^.
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Surya’s attention went to Yuuri. “Yuuri, I hope he’s legal?”
For some reason, this line really amused me. ;]
Your fic was wonderful <3
For some reason, this line really amused me. ;]
Your fic was wonderful <3
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this chapter!!! (Yuuri is my sugar daddy made me laugh)
But I can't wait to see what happens to Faraya after Yuuri finds out what he did to Wolfram!
There's going to be trouble!
And I really want to see how you get Amae and Kyota togeether.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
But I can't wait to see what happens to Faraya after Yuuri finds out what he did to Wolfram!
There's going to be trouble!
And I really want to see how you get Amae and Kyota togeether.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for this, for what feels like forever!
And you delivered, just as I expected, though not what I expected.
Drunk horny Wolfram for the win!
I love the KKM world you create, and next-to-no authors do it as well as you.
I can't wait to read what ever you've got planned, and find out what happened to Faraya and the rest; though I must confess I'm looking forward to Yuuri finding out about the rape.
And you delivered, just as I expected, though not what I expected.
Drunk horny Wolfram for the win!
I love the KKM world you create, and next-to-no authors do it as well as you.
I can't wait to read what ever you've got planned, and find out what happened to Faraya and the rest; though I must confess I'm looking forward to Yuuri finding out about the rape.
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great ending 1st chapter i started laughing im so glad you started this one off lightly. ive been looking forward to this sequel but surprised the number of years. i was also surprised to see yuuri in charge of fayaya(sorry forgot the spelling) planet. i know anticipation is good for the soul but hope update soon
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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg you're back, this is great, and once againg i'm here to be with you all the way, glad this is going on still, i can't wait to know how all the unfinished affairs will end up. This was a nice start i like the hommy feeling about it, the familiarity between the characters and their relasioships. the way wolfram adapts to earth is quite funny, i'm only a bit disconcerted about the time passing by and the noticeble ageing diferences. oh and i love the drunk wolfram, poor asami. well i'll be as always waiting for more and thanks for continuin your wonderfull story.