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about #25...

1. Wooow! :-)

I loved the dancing, you described it so well. Are you Indian, also?

2. You know, now that you've expanded on Leahir's character, I found
myself thinking that HE would make a better match for Amae than Kyota.

To me, Kyota doesn't REALLY want Amae at all. Yeah...yeah, he may CARE,
but his feelings aren't deep enough and it always winds up in the end as
'just sex' between them...and that ISN'T enough. Plus, Amae and Kyota's
natures are TOO fiery, any type of relationship between them would only be
volatile and cause endless hardship.

Leahir on the other hand, even though he loves playing the game and can
be wicked when it comes to pursuing, comes across as 'the gentleman' and
seems to have the calming influence Amae needs.

Personally, I think they'd be GREAT together and would have the best romance,
once this mess with Kyota is resolved.

What do you think?

Of course, now I think Leahir wanting to buy Amae is NOT exactly a smart move,
but I'll see how you handle that one. Anyway, that's my thoughts on that, I feel
putting those two in the right situation [..and sometimes it winds up being dire..]
and they could start off the relationship with an understanding, at least.

Anyway, those are my feelings on that, let's just say I've always been a fan of the
underdog, the character people pays less attention to. I never did care much for the
''hero's friends'' who always seem to reap the awards JUST BECAUSE...

..and I think Leahir is a character who will eventually shine.

*whew* I think I'm finished.

PS-I hope you don't do emails suddenly because I just realized I need
to change mine as in right now.

I cannot believe that Leahir wants to buy Amae- whom I adore by the way- he's some piece of work that guy. I didn't want them together before because Kyota is one of those creeps on the outside in when it comes to Wolfram, but seeing them more and more I really like their could-be, you know what I mean? And honey, I only wish I could get beta readers, but no one ever bites when I bait with an asking, so its just me alone screwing up. I don't mind though, I enjoy my stories and all their many flaws. If people don't like it help me out, or don't read it. I don't care. What I'm working on isn't nearly as sick as your fics- sick meaning beyond amazing, I can't wait for the new one. I hope its Yuuri and Wolfram still you are the most beautiful mind when it comes to their relationship- but my story is Batteries Not Included if you're ever free it'd be cool if you could read it. *shrug* I pimp my fics but I don't shove them at people hahaha.

Hey, no need to be mad or anything. I was posting a lenghty review yesterday in regards with slapping thing, but then they went on the maintenance thingy.

Cause I totally agree with you on how people should understand where Yuri's getting about hitting Wolfram. I don't think I have disagree with you that, so... why you're bringing it up when I'm way okay with it. Wolfram's kinda deserve it, being manipulative kinda sucks especially when the person you're hurting is supposedly the one you care the most.

And I mean, I'm just wondering about the ageing thing, not that I am questioning it, cause besides this fic there are loads of fics that has the same thought as well, so, all I am saying is I'm confuse, but no need to snap like that. I'm asking for your own point of view regarding those thing, and I don't mean anything bad by it. I wonder what's wrong with you? Do I look like someone's who's flaming? Cause if I do, I wonder how you'll handle people who flame without reason. Calm down, ne? ^^ Don't be piss off, you appear to be in a very bad mood. Take a breath.

Now, cheer up. Cause as far as I know, I'm not even in a slightest had mocked your story. I'm not even ranting or whining or hating, do I? I guess I'll just shut up, and keep my thoughts to myself if you think I'm going beyond the line. Good luck though.

I'm enjoying this so far, but seeing its angst, I wonder what complication will arise though in the near future.

I know I'm being annoying, and again I know this is your story. But yes, I'm still as confuse about aging the same with anime/manga/novel and to your story. Half blooded mozuku's aged faster? the same as human? Then how come Conrad doesn't? he's the same as Yuri right?

But then on anime/manga/novel, Yuri does aged like human. Or is it because he's on earth? Anime's weird though, but novel is way more different. More intense and hot... wait, what am I blubbering about? lolz.

Yuri's friend here is okay now. I like him now, cause he's not that narrow minded guy when he first met Wolf.

You are so stupid perfect at their relationship I tear up everytime I hear them even say 'hello' to one another. I hope you never break them up, I'm only on chapter 2 and I would split hairs if this ended badly hahaha. Your writing is the best, mistakes and all it reminds me of me- only I have no beta reader and I just flat out suck at grammer- gramma you know what I can't even spell it. hahaha.

Understood...and it's good to know there's an
author out there who takes writing seriously
and not a brief past-time. :-)
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about #24...

It's good to see this story is prgressing as nicely
as it is. I'm glad to see the story didn't linger
too much on Lakarde's Academy days.

A thought just popped in my head, it would be ironic
if after all the grief Lakarde & Amae caused each other,
they wind being like a sort of a 'Prince & his
Consultant/Advisor. Because Amae reminds me of Gunter,
but MORE flambouyant and I think Amae really hasn't
shown his potential, yet.

Just a thought...

Ch23 - you were right, I loved it ^__^ Lark is such a cutie. I was surprised he lost himself in the whole fight thing and called his water element. He could just used another lion to counter the one coming at them. But oh well, Wolf will probably school him and he'll be more sleek with it the next time ^_^

about #23....

Well, after 50 years I'm back. Of course, that would happen
when you get stuck in another fandom, but I had mentioned
I would always check on this story for updates.
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Now, I liked this chapter, it will be interesting to see if living
on a military base will change Lakarde's view on things and
HOPEfully, help him to grow up. Because I can definitely see
him becoming a good king or Lord, IF he takes his life lessons
seriously.

Part two on #23...

Yeah, I can see from your comment you DEFINITELY
didn't understand what I meant.

Let me ask you this, do you read a lot of fiction
and I do mean A LOT. That's the only way you would
have understood where I was coming from.

I have read hundreds of fiction from five fandoms,
and I'm not exaggerating, and the one thing I have
NEVER understood, especially fiction between the
years 2003-2007, are authors who start a story and
completely abandon it.

Yes, they do, and what's sad about it most of the
authors were high schoolers OR they give the ''I'm
no longer interested in the fandom'' speech.

So, you have these stories sitting in limbo, with the
authors saying they will update and a year later you
STILL haven't heard from them.

It has made me wonder, why start a story you were
not invested in or will only continue IF you get
reviews?

Yes, reviews. There are authors who ACTUALLY give
what I call ''the ultimatum''....''If you don't
review, I won't post a chapter.''

Okay, I understand you want feedback, BUT when ''the
ultimatum'' is done for EVERY chapter, it makes me
wonder are you doing the story just for the pleasure
of it OR to feed your ego?

So, when I ask you the question, will you finish it...
it's out of curiosity OR will you leave because reviews
ARE few & far between, after all the series stopped a
while back and it's only natural to move onto something
else.

But, I'll stick with a story, if I see the author is
continuing it...and no, I didn't realize your story was
finished.

Does that clear things up?