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chap 21 the other was for chap 20 - wow... loaded chapters! I'm glad that Wolf is taking Lakarde with him and Yuuri to Earth, oh and I so hope he doesn't send him away to the academy. I completely agree with Kyota there. hehe Earth, has lots of unstable teens that Lakarde could meet, even relate too. Wolf, really really needs to just talk with him, they are so very much alike *snickers* thinking that Wolf would leave him in a desert some where *shakes head* an echo of what Wolf was thinking with Yuuri which incidentally got them together. Man, I don't want that to happen to Lakarde. And yuuri needs to stop being a jealous jerk and talk to Lakarde too. Yuuri had always seemed the type to love children.

ch22 - hehe, cheeky preteen! haha Wolf's so red in the face. So awesome! I'm in love! hehe "Daddies.." ^____^ this whole adventure was the best ever! I hope it all works out!

^____^... I've made all the way through and I want more. I adore Lakarde and want to squish him until he stops being so closed off. I like Amae and I'm glad he's back and I wish his complicate arse much happiness haha now that his king is gone, maybe he can focus and go into healing like he wanted. I love how he and Wolf interact. I can't be he flashed Lakarde(hope I spelled it right - if not, apologies I'm very tired right now)!! You had me smiling, sad and laughing then I couldn't stop myself from reading. I glad I didn't, this last chapter... brilliant. I knew Wolf would do it some how and I agree *snickers* they're all, in some way, idiots in love. The ending scene was indescribably beautiful. Thanks for continuing to write and I look forward to reading more. I would love for Yuuri to have his own child and for Lakarde to open up more and be happy.

going fishing...
I can't remember the chapter number but wow...if you couldn't tell from my previous comments that I'm hooked, I just wanted to inform you that I'm hooked! Sooo.... Is Wolf trying to harden Yuuri for something? Make him more aggressive for some reason? Because I agree with Asami, Wolf is making him crazy! Haha his poor fat cat Murkis!

I'm sorry, this is separate but where can I find you Mpreg fics for Yuu=Wolf?

about #22..

Back again after a 2 months hiatus, reading HP fiction WILL
do that. :-)

You know, I'm surprised YOU are sticking with this story, most
authors would have given up, BUT I guess you're 'the little
author that could...and will.' Finish that is.

Good to see that Lakarde has some tact and isn't much of a spoiled
brat like his father. I take that back, I think he's worse, but at
least he listens.

After reading the last 2 chapters I had an uncomfortable feeling,
that this story will come to a sad ending as we go through the years
of Yuuri & Wolfram's relationship.

That's something a reader doesn't want to see, but it happens.

It'll be interesting to see how you end it.

I'm always interested in the WOTP universe ^_^ and Kyota in bed with Wolf and Yuuri is just awesome! Can't wait to see what you do with the Yuuri-Wolfram-Lakarde relationship.

You know, you just made my day even better. I did a happy dance when I noticed it got updated. I feel kind of bad for Lakarde. I was laughing a lot at Kyota wound up in their bed. Just, a really amazing chapter! I'm just wondering is Yuuri ever going to get a Trusted Lady? I'm kinda hoping he will. I can't wait for more!

about #20...

Well, it's been a good 5+ months. :-) But, work [..and being on sick leave]
does that, but I'll always be back to check here to see what's been updated.
Surprised to see a lot have,

Anyway, I'm glad to see Wolfram FINALLY tell Yuuri what happened..and I'm
glad to see you didn't write that Yuuri was too clueless to have noticed.
At Yuuri's age, I would THINK he can read between the lines at this point.

But, what I want to know is, what ARE you going to do with Larkade, because I
NEVER liked the child and this latest action is unforgiveable.

By the way, loved the scene with Amae & the mouse...that NEVER gets old. :-)

How happy I am, thatyou didn´t write that flogging scene, I wouldn´t have been able to bear it ._. I am happy, that Wolfram finally could tell everything...but that means, that the story is nearly over, does it?

Umm...so not even...they are so not even!!! Flirting heavily with some chick vs. child-bearing activities and a shared child!? So not even!!!!