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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #15...
1. well, the ending of the chapter had me like this... O_o
Even though I get a feeling I know who was the one throwing the vase. :-)
2. You know, I'm SO starting not to like Wolfram's kid, unless he does something
that shows he IS a noble child at heart.
3. Okay, I HAD to laugh about the Saraluigi thing[I know I'm not spelling it right].
It's only ONE person, NOT two. :-) You keep separating the name.
4. I wouldn't make fun OR constantly comment on someone's grammar. I would only
mention it one time and be done with it. Besides I can tell you're sensitive about
certain things.
5. I didn't realize this until you wrote it, but I TRULY miss the times Yuuri &
Wolfram would stay on Earth. I dunno, but it's just a truly different atmosphere.
..and that's it for now.
1. well, the ending of the chapter had me like this... O_o
Even though I get a feeling I know who was the one throwing the vase. :-)
2. You know, I'm SO starting not to like Wolfram's kid, unless he does something
that shows he IS a noble child at heart.
3. Okay, I HAD to laugh about the Saraluigi thing[I know I'm not spelling it right].
It's only ONE person, NOT two. :-) You keep separating the name.
4. I wouldn't make fun OR constantly comment on someone's grammar. I would only
mention it one time and be done with it. Besides I can tell you're sensitive about
certain things.
5. I didn't realize this until you wrote it, but I TRULY miss the times Yuuri &
Wolfram would stay on Earth. I dunno, but it's just a truly different atmosphere.
..and that's it for now.
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I'm just waiting for Lakarde and Yuri to have a big confrontation. I really like how Yuri actually cares about Lakarde and is not jealous all the time. Where did Wolfram end up? I can’t wait for the next chapter.
I have to say that your KKM story or series of stories, has just ruined me for any other author in this genre. I first started reading with Working out the Paradox, and I just can’t bring myself to read anyone else’s work. I love dextrousleftie’s work and I just can’t start her KKM series. I think that this is the 3rd time I’ve read this chapter. I know that you update about once a month, but every time I visit the site I double check to see if you’ve updated.
Anyway, enough rambling. Love the story, keep up the good work.
I have to say that your KKM story or series of stories, has just ruined me for any other author in this genre. I first started reading with Working out the Paradox, and I just can’t bring myself to read anyone else’s work. I love dextrousleftie’s work and I just can’t start her KKM series. I think that this is the 3rd time I’ve read this chapter. I know that you update about once a month, but every time I visit the site I double check to see if you’ve updated.
Anyway, enough rambling. Love the story, keep up the good work.
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January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And seriously, just as I was asking myself where the hell Amae had gotten to... Like seriously! As Wolfram was talking to Yuuri's parents, and I noticed I was getting to the end of the chapter, and that I'd review soon, the first thing that came to my mind is 'Where's Amae in this story?' I missed him... And then he appears out of nowhere! Though I could of done without the Faraya. -coughidiotcough-
Oh hey! Sorry, forgot to introdue myself. I know, probably a freak for wanting to introduce myself on a review, but if I really like a story, you can expect constant reviews from me, whether people reply to them or not. And from what I can see, you reply:P
So I'm pretty much known as Ella. I've been reading your stories for about 3 days now, after finding the first one while browsing through KKM stories. Pretty much fell in love with it on site, when found out there was a sequel, and a third one in the making, I was soooo excited! Like, damn! That's a lot of writing!
So the reason I didn't review the other two was mainly because if I read something with a sequel, I'll wait till the very end to review. Forgive me! But don't worry! All will be reviewed in here! So this might take a while... the future reviews won't be quite so long, I promise ^^
I loved the first one. Kyota's easilly one of my favourite characters, and even though I knew he couldn't be with Wolfram, it still made me sad, ya know? Like, he should get some lovin' too! But he handles it well. I think that a lot of people would of handled it worse, ya know? Which is good.
The second one was fricken amazing. At first, I soooo wanted to see an KyotaxAsami pairing (If you ever think of using that pairing, I'll be right behind you supporting you!) but then as time progressed, I could kinda see how the KyotaxAmae pairing would work. But at the same time, I knew that Amae would eventually choose Faraya, because Faraya was in love with him, no matter what anyone else sad. Even bad guys need some lovin'. I was so happy when Kyota finally admitted to himself that he liked Amae, but then Amae had to go and fuck it up by chooseing Faraya.
Neh, the third one... slightly different. Like, I think I read in the first chapter or something that this one was going to be written differently then the last two, and I can definetely see what you mean. But it works, as well? Like, if you had tried to put this one into the last two's story format, it wouldn't of worked as well. And the kid's sooooo cute! Sorry for my lack of name remembering, but anyways...
And now I'm waiting on the edge of my seat patiently to find out what Faraya's gonna do to Wolfram, and how Wolf will react to seeing Amae again.
Till next chapter!
Ella
Oh hey! Sorry, forgot to introdue myself. I know, probably a freak for wanting to introduce myself on a review, but if I really like a story, you can expect constant reviews from me, whether people reply to them or not. And from what I can see, you reply:P
So I'm pretty much known as Ella. I've been reading your stories for about 3 days now, after finding the first one while browsing through KKM stories. Pretty much fell in love with it on site, when found out there was a sequel, and a third one in the making, I was soooo excited! Like, damn! That's a lot of writing!
So the reason I didn't review the other two was mainly because if I read something with a sequel, I'll wait till the very end to review. Forgive me! But don't worry! All will be reviewed in here! So this might take a while... the future reviews won't be quite so long, I promise ^^
I loved the first one. Kyota's easilly one of my favourite characters, and even though I knew he couldn't be with Wolfram, it still made me sad, ya know? Like, he should get some lovin' too! But he handles it well. I think that a lot of people would of handled it worse, ya know? Which is good.
The second one was fricken amazing. At first, I soooo wanted to see an KyotaxAsami pairing (If you ever think of using that pairing, I'll be right behind you supporting you!) but then as time progressed, I could kinda see how the KyotaxAmae pairing would work. But at the same time, I knew that Amae would eventually choose Faraya, because Faraya was in love with him, no matter what anyone else sad. Even bad guys need some lovin'. I was so happy when Kyota finally admitted to himself that he liked Amae, but then Amae had to go and fuck it up by chooseing Faraya.
Neh, the third one... slightly different. Like, I think I read in the first chapter or something that this one was going to be written differently then the last two, and I can definetely see what you mean. But it works, as well? Like, if you had tried to put this one into the last two's story format, it wouldn't of worked as well. And the kid's sooooo cute! Sorry for my lack of name remembering, but anyways...
And now I'm waiting on the edge of my seat patiently to find out what Faraya's gonna do to Wolfram, and how Wolf will react to seeing Amae again.
Till next chapter!
Ella
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't tell me that Wolfram was again kidnapped and returned to the other third space where he was sent when he followed Yuuri into the fire in the first story?
I hope not since he was drugged and raped in the first story.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
I hope not since he was drugged and raped in the first story.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hiahhh~
another chapter!
XD
XD
plz...do continue this story till the endddd~
another chapter!
XD
XD
plz...do continue this story till the endddd~
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw... It's perfect as always... Damn I love this story... It's a pitty you are going to leave this fandom after you finish the trilogy, but oh well... I guess you are already fed up with KKM, right? Heh, I will start reading your other stories then, do not worry (as if u would... heh). Actually, well, I'm thinking about drawing one more picture with Kyota, Amae, Yuuri, Wolfram and Lakarde in it... Hehhe, I cannot guarantee that I will really do it but... The image I have in mind is not that bad. :D
So keep it up, and I'm looking forward to the other chapter.
P.S. Good luck with your beta. *wink*
So keep it up, and I'm looking forward to the other chapter.
P.S. Good luck with your beta. *wink*
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update soon pleaseeeeeee~
can't wait no moreee~
XD
can't wait no moreee~
XD
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December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
about #13...[good to see you back]
Yes your reader is back again, I do check here every other week to see who has
updated.
Read the first story in the ''trilogy'' one more time, because I like how you developed the budding relationship between Yuuri & Wolfram. :-)
1. You know, it's sort of..kind of hard sticking with a fandom, especially when a lot of people don't know about it and the authors are far & few between...meaning you never get that many stories and the scarce amount of authors you have either disappear OR their updates are long in coming.
Those are just observations of mine.
2. Hey, have you discovered Code Geass yet? Personally, I'm more interested in
the relationship between Lelouch & CC, so no room for yaoi in that department.
3. Do you know where online I can lookup how to write letters overseas? For
example, I'd liked to mail a letter to Japan, BUT I noticed there seems to be
different..districts? Also, it's hard to tell which is the address and city.
4. Also, I figured you'd disappear after writing this ''trilogy''. Too bad...I can see you doing one shots every now & then, but IF you ever slide back into KKM fandom, check out the situation between Sara' & Yuugi.
It kind of makes you wonder WHY the writers don't have Wolfram having a hissy fit when Yuuri becomes concerned about Saraluigi...and trust me, Yuuri becomes concerned about him more than necessary. :-)
5. Why do I have a feeling this child will cause problems in the future, especially when he becomes a teenager? Besides, we do know how most teenagers are...
6. I'm glad you're starting to acknowledge the fact Yuuri is noticing that he's getting older, brings more reality to the story. BUT, wouldn't he age a little slower being half Mazoku [?], I would think by the time he was 80, he would look like he's still 32.
After all, Conrad is half Mazoku...and he has lived for decades.
7. One last thing, while reading your first story I wondered have you played with the
idea of telling a story of what happened in the timeframe between Y & W getting married and before Wolfram & the gang disappeared.
I thought it's be interesting to see the dynamics between Yuuri & Kyota and Wolfram & Asami.
..and that IS enough for now.
Yes your reader is back again, I do check here every other week to see who has
updated.
Read the first story in the ''trilogy'' one more time, because I like how you developed the budding relationship between Yuuri & Wolfram. :-)
1. You know, it's sort of..kind of hard sticking with a fandom, especially when a lot of people don't know about it and the authors are far & few between...meaning you never get that many stories and the scarce amount of authors you have either disappear OR their updates are long in coming.
Those are just observations of mine.
2. Hey, have you discovered Code Geass yet? Personally, I'm more interested in
the relationship between Lelouch & CC, so no room for yaoi in that department.
3. Do you know where online I can lookup how to write letters overseas? For
example, I'd liked to mail a letter to Japan, BUT I noticed there seems to be
different..districts? Also, it's hard to tell which is the address and city.
4. Also, I figured you'd disappear after writing this ''trilogy''. Too bad...I can see you doing one shots every now & then, but IF you ever slide back into KKM fandom, check out the situation between Sara' & Yuugi.
It kind of makes you wonder WHY the writers don't have Wolfram having a hissy fit when Yuuri becomes concerned about Saraluigi...and trust me, Yuuri becomes concerned about him more than necessary. :-)
5. Why do I have a feeling this child will cause problems in the future, especially when he becomes a teenager? Besides, we do know how most teenagers are...
6. I'm glad you're starting to acknowledge the fact Yuuri is noticing that he's getting older, brings more reality to the story. BUT, wouldn't he age a little slower being half Mazoku [?], I would think by the time he was 80, he would look like he's still 32.
After all, Conrad is half Mazoku...and he has lived for decades.
7. One last thing, while reading your first story I wondered have you played with the
idea of telling a story of what happened in the timeframe between Y & W getting married and before Wolfram & the gang disappeared.
I thought it's be interesting to see the dynamics between Yuuri & Kyota and Wolfram & Asami.
..and that IS enough for now.
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November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I always love all your fanfics. After reading all 13 chapters, well, I'm just wondering, that I thought at the beginning there were some kind of danger to wolfram. I think that maybe you save it for the last, but until the son grew up, there is no such danger. Well, I just thought maybe - I'm sorry I forget his name - the owner of harem, is still haunting wolfram, as he is kind of love wolfram. That would be a great disaster, right? Give some spices in your story line. I expect there will be great adventure for the following chapter. Keep on writing my friend. I am waiting... btw, thanks, I really enjoy your story as I am one of the huge fans of wolfram. Cheers.
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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
about #12...
Man, talk about problems and I get a feeling you're about to introduce some in
a difficult triangle of epic porportions, how does the song go...''so you wanna
be startin' something.''
...will Yuuri find out about what happened to Wolfram or is it no longer relevant?
Too bad you won't get into the 3rd season of KKM, because I think you could do
wonders on a Saraluigi/Yuuri/Wolfram triangle.
Man, talk about problems and I get a feeling you're about to introduce some in
a difficult triangle of epic porportions, how does the song go...''so you wanna
be startin' something.''
...will Yuuri find out about what happened to Wolfram or is it no longer relevant?
Too bad you won't get into the 3rd season of KKM, because I think you could do
wonders on a Saraluigi/Yuuri/Wolfram triangle.