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about #7...

Well, I'm not in the frame of mind to do a thoughtful review, so I'll just say
welcome back, it has been awhile.

What kept you?

hmmm Yuuri with an entrusted lady, never thought about that. It would be cool so see little Yuuri's and Wolfram's though!

I like this angle for a Kyou Kara Maou fanfic, it's a nice change from m-preg's (not to say that I don't like them) but this is a spin that seems more real! You can easily imagine that in a society where Kings are allowed to marry men, before all the technological advancements of today, that a selected lady would be brought in to bear the children.

I really like Inexorable flow but Yuuri’s views seem different from WoftGE regarding the dominating with sex but maybe I’m reading too much into it. But from “Anticipating and excited just as if he’d be lying in place of Wolfram, he slid two fingers in, breaching the both muscle rings.” he seemed to enjoy being top and bottom. Am I reading too much into it or is that a deliberate change?

Well shori saved me the trouble of doing that exact same question, i was about to ask what about yuuri wanting his own kids, and wondered if even if the wolfram needing an heir hadn't traspired would yuuri still eventually aks about having kids. either way, wolfram can't say nothing about it, its only fair. I want ted to say that that this chapter struck a little too close to home, regarding relationships hangging by the treath, i know how they feel when it seems no matter what its all going to hell, and if it doesn't things will never be the same, and there will be hurts that run to deep that had taken hold, bitterness, resentment and guilt permiate every aspect of the relationship, but still you pointlessly hang on wheter by it because of use and old age or for real unmessure love, i can't say which and maybe some times is imposible to tell them appart. But on to anothet topic, i can also relate to being shy in bed even after many years, especially when being talked diry to so bluntly, i still turn ten shades of red. the sex once again was awesome, but i wanted to ask, when yuuri has wolfram in all fours and wolfram is wantonly offering himself as desperate for more, what did you meant when wolfram wonders how all of it seems to yuuri, i'm afraid i don't get the nature of the question, its probably not even important but you know i think to much and every insignificant detail, becomes an issue with me, so if you could humor my curiosity on this or at least set me straight as to what he meant, if not its okay, i'll do some inacurate speculating as always. I loved Leahir, the guy has as much bite as kyota and wolfram themselves. His sarcasm and bluntness was great, and i was awe struck with the description of him in wolf's study, he is a hot piece of ass at least in my imagination. I don't really like crossdressing but i had to laugh when he is described as a handsome man but a much more beautyfull woman, it made me think of him as yozak little brother, i'm still amzed at how he pulled it off. I can't belive how kyota plays dumb, the nerve, no wonder the guy is pisssed. I would have love to read more in to the whole "substitude" fight, but i guess since its not relevant to the story that will be it, oh well pitty. well ja ne!

Your updates make my day, they really do! Ever since the beginning with WotP.
Your portrayal of both Yuuri and Wolfram is remarkable, it is difficult to find a fic where they have aged AND matured appropriately with that age.
And I quite liked your more violent scenes, say where Yuuri hit Wolfram, because the emotion that is involved in their relationship is quite turbulent and whether it was because Yuuri is a straight-guy-turned or not, it is quite natural to let loose and go, well, nuts when a build up of emotion finally bursts. Emotions are not rose-coloured and nobody can stay 100% sane 100% of the time. It is very refreshing to come across a fic that doesn't...'soften the blow', if you like.
One thing I COMPLETELY agree with you on is Greta................that whiny brat annoys the hell out of me...I hate it when she is in the anime episodes...it makes me want to mute it and simply read the subtitles...or skip it entirely. I'm not completely heartless and I got that Yuuri wanted to understand her reasonings, but adopting her was too much, I would have placed her in foster care in one of the villages or something and let that be the end of her story...she tried to kill him for crying out loud!
I do have to ask one other thing, while your series is solely about Yuuri and Wolfram, you have mentioned the progressing lives of the other main characters both in passing and a little detail, out of pure curiosity, what about Conrart (or Conrad, which ever you prefer)? Is it merely that you're not a fan or not really concerned with him? I am not accusing you if you're not and I really really like reading about Yuuri and Wolfram first and foremost, but with his increasing presence in the new series of the anime (even if you haven't watched it), it leaves the question to be asked of what you may have in mind for the (squickingly) loyal boy-scout's life HAHA! I really like the fact that he was a right little stuck up, cocky up-start when he was younger, it makes him much more hotter as a man...
Sorry, I am rambling! Leaving now!
I am really looking forward to your next chapter!

KittenCeez!
xxx

great as always am waiting for meat though. you always keep me enraptured.

I know Yuuri thinks he is going to hate the child now, but later when he finally sees it, he is probably going to change his mind. Who can hate an innocent child?

Nice entrance, Kyota! and borrow Wolf's shirt just to piss Yuuri off, you're an asshole Kyota :)

I hope there wouldn't be anymore woman. Esp. if she's for Yuuri just to have a baby of his own. Okay, he wants his own child, but to actually do it I didn't think Wolf would let him easily. Maybe a threat of divorce from Wolf? he hates sharing. And if one of Yuuri's reasons why he did that was 'if he could, why I didn't?', he's a so much more selfish man than Wolf then. So, I do hope that no more woman involved.

Was that doggie style?
Sex was the greatest invention ever!

Wow, this series is amazing... I feel so bad for Yuuri at this point. So much has happened between him and Wolfram. My favorite parts of this series where when Wolfram was convinced that Yuuri hated him in the first book (when he made him drink milk right before Yuuri confessed) and when the whole love scene at the start of the second book. I like the idea of Wolfram wearing a golden bracelet. God, I feel so bad for Yuuri though. Wolfram could literally tear him apart so easily, that's how in deep they are. After fourteen years... I wonder if Wolfram will be able to even go through with it sober. I wouldnt be able to have sex with someone I didnt love if I was IN love with someone as much as Wolf is in love with Yuuri. You are an amazing writer. I am so emotionally invested in the characters and I enjoy the smut too... because sex is just as much a part of life as all the other romance. But your smut isnt the stupid emotionless kind. The sex in here has character development and meaning behind it. I look forward to reading more of this!

What a great chapter! It is so nice to read a long and fulfilling read.
I really like the couple tension. It is done very realistically. I seriously don't know if I could ever do something like Yuri intends to (allow a third party) do in real life. I have read stories where that complicated relationship is well done and I've enjoyed them a lot, but boy you really must like challenges. Because you set up two heavy challenges there, Wolfram getting a child and Yuuri needing one too + the bitterness that at the moment only one gets to have it and not the other?.... Oh I get carried away. But you never dissapoint, and I'm curious to know what the next plot turn will be :)

PS. Hurray for a Kyota comeback. I've followed him since the early days and that bad boy still rocks!

Thank you so much for a wonderful story.

I hope it'll go well, just like what yuuri is thinking even tho he has now agreed ( which as and not suprised me, since there wasn't much solution possible xD but it still did in a way following yuuri's aptitude so far in this fic) and well, lotsa sex in there xD(two but it took half of the fiction^^') if I recall, you had just wrote once wolf taking yuuri right? (I should prolly re-read but I am a bit not home lately and I cannot recall clearly but there was once I know...or think I know >.>
I wonder, will kyota see wolf's face? I'd like to kow how it would end (he'd prolly be the type to kill the guy who did that to wolf right? or a least beat him up a lot)

it,s really surprising cause I read this chapter (6) in two separated shot oO and I don't remeber what I wanted to say on the firt half of it TT.TT *cries* oh well, it'll maybe return to me one day^^'' and I can't wait to see what the next chapter and the others will be xD (I say it often but it doesn't matter: your fic are just way too good and I cannot klnow what will happen next cause you really are such a good writter! xD continue with your good work!)...I can,t help but feel I have written this way too badly for what I wanted to say, oh well.


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