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sorry for the repost. I read a bit of the comment of this chapter 6, and my thought would go a bit like those of Ivy xD (if it can help make my comment a bit clearer^^' sorry)

I had been wondering what secret Wolfram was keeping from Yuuri. I knew it had to be serious, but damn.
Wolfram should be happy Yuuri found out sooner rather than later. Because later the conversation would've been: "Yuuri, I am having an illegitimate child by the woman you unwittingly agreed to let me have an affair with. I can't agree it won't happen again if it's a girl this time. But either you accept this or we'll get a divorce."
Now I love Wolfram, and love him with Yuuri , but even I would've been like "Bitch get the papers, and I want to see our pre-nup!" Yuuri has forgiven people who have tried to kill, but that level of deception would've been too much. I'm g;ad they made up.

If this wasn't a fanfic I would wonder how anybody could get over something like that and stay together and if it were any other author I would wonder how them getting through this could be made into a believable fic.

You've got your work cut out for you!

And I agree with what you said about Yuuri’s blind rage and anger being understandable and reasonable. I don't think anyone could act in any other way, unless they where brought up in a world where having an entrusted lady was common, even someone as placid as Yurri.

Yes after that longass review i still have got more to say, but you already know that i think too much specialy after i log out, so here is my reverie. I know you're going to hate me for this but i have to say it. I know you despise all the seme uke thing, you've made it quite clear a few times, and i'm sure you are right in your views of it, but... yes there is a but, there are preferences, even you made that distingtion in this chapter. Yes you did, and before you bash me let me say firts that i love it, i'm refering to the part were you distinguish the meaning of penetration for yuuri and wolfram. Yuuri be it because he feels that way or influenced by his culture has reservetion in being penetrated by a man, and preferes to be the one to take, even if he enjoys being taken it not his real high, thus he is primarily a top, as it is know commonly in our gay slang. Now wolfram is another matter, though he has no reservation in taking or being taken he relishes the feel of penetration and i most say i agree with him, make of wolfram primarly a bottom. Don't go getting all pissed at me just yet let me explain a bit more. you associate the top and bottom or seme uke trend as a way of redefining a man woman steriotypes in a homo relationship and many see it that way, but its a lot more complex than that, you said something about equal relationships, let me asure you that preferences have nothing to do with equality, i'm a bottom at heart and don't really like to top, and i don't unless i really have to, and that doesn't make me any different then partner, we are still both 100% men and equal in all aspects exept that i prefere to be the one being taken. I'm not defending this trend or anything so don't get me wrong, i'm just saying that there is a complex gama of shades between black and white to many gradetions in shades of grey, that even you made a distiontion in them with yuuri and wolfram. So there go ahead and chew me out, i deserve it, apart from that, i wanted to say that even if i seemed a bit shocked i liked the violence in the previews chaps, i've already told you i love the angst and like it when my fav char (wolfram) gets hurt, so feel free to bash him some more after you're done bashing me that is for this lovely review, which is not a review at all is it? oh also i liked the mention of yuuri not being able to supres muratas powers, there should be more of him in the story, actually you should writte one for him as the main character, oh but obviously as gay, i still shuder at the three maids orgy in wotp. well i'll let you be so you can rave and gett all pissed at me, like i said no offence intended and i'm not defending the seme/man uke/woman trend, ja ne!

Review on chapter 6:

I liked the sex scenes... but I see a problem with Yuuri being almost everytime on top. I know, you wrote that they switched, but I want more Wolfram seme!! You thought, that ppl were shocked by Yuuri hitting Wolfram because they viewed him as uke and thus as the female part of the relationship. I don't think this is entirely true (at least in my case it isn't like that), but if that's the case, it is maybe connected to the role Wolfram seems to take on in their sexual relationship.

I think violence just isn't right. That goes for every kind of relationship. Parents shouldn't hit their children, men shouldn't hit their women and vice versa. Some ppl think, that it's ok for women to hit their husbands for cheating. NO IT ISN'T!

You are right, that Wolfram is the more violent person. That's one of his character traits I really don't like. It shows his insecurities and inability to deal with his jealousy in a more mature way. So violence is weakness in my eyes. That goes for both of them.

I was surprised, that Yuuri finally agreed to this. They will have many issues with the Entrusted Lady, that's for sure, but he is willing to do this for Wolf. I am proud of you Yuuri! And of Murata, too! You clever little fellow! You brought tham back together. I hope, you will be around when Yuuri learns of Faraya!

Will we read someting of the actions between Wolfram and the chosen Lady? My perverted mind leaks through this, but I am really curious how Wolfram feel pull it of. If he really isn't the least bit interested in women.

My regards, Ivy

Okay i'm going to work my way backwards. Aww! the last scene was sweet and damngood reconciliation sex! they really needed it. I love the way they are ready to give it all to salvage their relationship, the will survive all this mess. The gwendal scene was sweet too, and yuuri is right, he should count his blessings since gwendal didn't bash him for hitting wolf not once but twice. I keep forgetting is gwendal involved with guinter in yout story? I know murata has the three maid for wives and a bunsh of kids, which is disturbing, and more so now that i have a new obsetion in pairings, i love the gwendal/murata pair, but that doesn't come to the case. Speaking of murata, the guy is cunning and tricksy. I don't recol him calling yuuri by his first name, but rather shibuya, and when he came in to the office screaming yuuri's name, it made him seem much more urgent, but it was a dirty trick to tell him that wolfram was seriously wounded, and then disapear from the scene, i bet that he never left the castle to go to the healing house with yuuri. kyota will have something to say about the whole thing too and yuuri has dropped some serious respects points in the kyota score. I would have liked to read the meeting between yuuri and wolf's dad, and i'm surpriced that yuuri finally agree to the whole mess. I would have castrated wolfram infront of his father, to keep him from goig through it. I keep wondering how the whole thing would work after the baby is born, like would wolfram keep the baby, would yuuri even accept the baby, given the firstborn is male, if its girls i can't imagine yuuri's dismay. hopefully i won't have to see how it turns out, i really don't want to see wolfram with a woman nor with a baby. I find that yuuri's insecurities thoug well founded are a bit ironic, since he thinks of wolfram as gay, and contemplates about the posibility of wolfram turning straight, which i highly doubt. But its a bit hypocrytal when yuuri is the one who likes women too and had as he calls it close calls with more than one, which is something that wolfram hasn't done, be it with a man or a woman. As for the general coment in the wolfram bashing, i guess you are right in both points people reacted harshly at it becaouse its rare to see yuuri so violent, and peoples missconception of relating wolfram with a woman, which i don't share i might add, they are men both there are no ladies involved in their realtionship. to me it was a bit shocking yes, cuz the first option, but i desagree on the terms of wolf's violence towards yuuri in the anime, yes he tries to smack, strangle, and fry yuuri in numerous occations, but the key word here is try, he didn't ever hurt yuuri, and it was never in ernest, or to me it didn't, feel free to tell me to go to hell. and what surprice me too was the wolfram didn't retaliate, being so fiesty, but i guess it comes back to the point, he could never hurt yuuri intentionaly. so yeah, and i will say it i do feel cheated with the turns of events, and you are going to get pissed at me but fuck it i'm going to say it anyway, and i never thought i could say this, but irather they addopt greta to have wolfram having a baby wiht a stranger, yes i know you hate me for saying it. any way even if the twist is disconcerting i'm sticking to this to the end, lets see what else the future brings, surprice me and hit me with your best shot, i'll take it all. ja ne!

I agree with your statements about the "violent reactions" regarding Yuuri hitting Wolfram. Sometimes it is hard to forget that Wolfram is still a male & male aggressive reactions are normal. Good explanation though.

I was just shocked because Wolfram is my favorite character. Every time someone tried to hard him, i feel the urge to bitch slap someone. <3

Wonderful update though. Can't wait to read more.

I still feel sorry for Yuuri with Wolfram cheating on him - even if it is with permission - I am confused though why it wasnt suggested that Yuuri do it also as the Maou i realize technically the Maou isnt a hereditary position but i thought that they would want his genes and magic capablility passed on as well

Hmm, the whole hitting thing...I was shocked, but at the same time I guess I saw it coming in a way when the whole topic of an "Entrusted Lady" or something was introduced. I mean I think I see it the same way you do. They're both 100% male, and even though Wolfram is very effeminate, it doesn't hide the fact that he's a guy. Equality yay~ :) But yeah, Yuuri does seem to be more calm characterwise, yet at the same time I think it was also expected too especially with how at the beginning of the story, you did introduce the idea/thought that Yuuri found himself being more aggresive/possessive of Wolfram, afraid to give him up to anyone, I guess if I remember correctly? :D

I think overall, everything fits together. I kind of like this twist in the story with the whole heir thing in addition to the whole upcoming Faraya bit. ^^ Definitely looking forward to seeing what happens~ Because while living "happily ever after" is a great, wonderful, WAFF concept, the reality is that it never quite works out that way. xD

Plus I must say I like how your trilogy takes a look into different periods of their life/relationship~ It's really nice :D Looking forward to reading more of Inexorable Flow. It really has a different feel from the other parts of the trilogy. Guess more mature feeling, considering that they're older now and been together longer? :D

Can't wait for Chapter 7 :3

WOOHOO! Update! YAY!
You know, I exhale my breath loudly when Yuuri finally comes to term with the trouble. And yes, they're 100% males. In the novel, Wolf is so manly, much more than Yuuri. I don't buy into that seme-uke thing either. It's…ridiculous --;
Add Kyota into the picture!
When Yuuri finds out about Faraya, the hell will break loose.
Very, very healthy sex life! XD
I think Wolf would let Yuuri be the dominant one for a long time to make up everything. But, who knows? you're the author :D