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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
While I understand that both of them are men, I believe that hitting anyone in the face is wrong.
Anyways I wonder if Wolfram will be even able to do it with a women. I don't know how Yuuri will be able to take this even if he agreed to allow it to happen.
Look forward to the next chaper.
alicem
Anyways I wonder if Wolfram will be even able to do it with a women. I don't know how Yuuri will be able to take this even if he agreed to allow it to happen.
Look forward to the next chaper.
alicem
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, so that’s what Wolfram meant when he was talking to Asami about Yuuri thinking he was cheating on him!
What a tough decision to make, thank goodness we don’t have to make those kinds of decisions.
I can understand Yuuri’s anger and Wolfram not wanting to tell him, I don’t think I would want to, although it’s one of those things that the partner would eventually find out!!!
How will they recover from this???
What a tough decision to make, thank goodness we don’t have to make those kinds of decisions.
I can understand Yuuri’s anger and Wolfram not wanting to tell him, I don’t think I would want to, although it’s one of those things that the partner would eventually find out!!!
How will they recover from this???
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oO OMG there is so much that happened in those three chapter! I didn't had my internet for a while and was in my finals anyway but...HELL!!! Now the thing that had caught me really is in your latest chapter, chapter 5...seriously, I want to know how this will end up....hope they won't broke cause well, but then again...your making it so difficult sometimes that I almost sees that end XD but nah, seriously T.T why does wolf keep so much for him, even if yeah okay, yuuri is a bit overreative, but hence, I can understand him here sometimes. Even to in shin makoku there are different cultures and all, since wolf knows that and knows how it works on earth, well...I can't follow his line sometime (but thats probably why I love that fic so much, it makes them humans, the way you wrote them in this fic)
I dunno in whom of them I feel but (must be the habit of reading and having my own stories and characters but) I am feeling a bit at at loss...like them if I can say. That messy sentiment of being cornered, only with a two option trap like quiz is kind of...troubling inside and soo not feeling great...T.T anyway, I can't wait to see how you will get them out of this one...
Plus now thats this is said! I am sure those attackers were'farayas. He would want to get wolfram in his harem again for sure and I wonder how is amae doin?? and kyota? we haven't seen them much lately xD even tho they spoke of them a bit...hum, who is leahir again? I should go re-read the other chapters cause I don't remember xD I only registered the big part of the story but I think I tend to forgot some caracter...sorry... And how could they have been able to summon the gates, those attackers? I thought that only the rulers of the world and the upper grades could summon it? or mybe, I haven't folowed the story or again, after such a while not reading only forgot important things xD (finals really suck, plus, I sawed that my result were horrible urg!)
Anyway, I hope that the next chapter will relieve a bit of pressure on those two, or just add more xD or I dunno as long as it doesn't walks in circle but stays there, thus I don't think you did that xD and makes me curious cause I never am able to knows what will happen next except the fact that I might question too much xD (probably the effect you wnat to gave here?readers questionnin?)
Anyway, I hope your doin great and all x3 cause I do (searchin for a job but anyway I hope I'll be able to get more times to continue reading even if I do work)take your time tho, I wnat you to write as good a chapter as those you already made x3! I'll be working my asses off and will go read your fics to end my day on a good note x3!
have a good day! and keep it up the good work x3!
P-S: okay, I ramble too much XDDD
I dunno in whom of them I feel but (must be the habit of reading and having my own stories and characters but) I am feeling a bit at at loss...like them if I can say. That messy sentiment of being cornered, only with a two option trap like quiz is kind of...troubling inside and soo not feeling great...T.T anyway, I can't wait to see how you will get them out of this one...
Plus now thats this is said! I am sure those attackers were'farayas. He would want to get wolfram in his harem again for sure and I wonder how is amae doin?? and kyota? we haven't seen them much lately xD even tho they spoke of them a bit...hum, who is leahir again? I should go re-read the other chapters cause I don't remember xD I only registered the big part of the story but I think I tend to forgot some caracter...sorry... And how could they have been able to summon the gates, those attackers? I thought that only the rulers of the world and the upper grades could summon it? or mybe, I haven't folowed the story or again, after such a while not reading only forgot important things xD (finals really suck, plus, I sawed that my result were horrible urg!)
Anyway, I hope that the next chapter will relieve a bit of pressure on those two, or just add more xD or I dunno as long as it doesn't walks in circle but stays there, thus I don't think you did that xD and makes me curious cause I never am able to knows what will happen next except the fact that I might question too much xD (probably the effect you wnat to gave here?readers questionnin?)
Anyway, I hope your doin great and all x3 cause I do (searchin for a job but anyway I hope I'll be able to get more times to continue reading even if I do work)take your time tho, I wnat you to write as good a chapter as those you already made x3! I'll be working my asses off and will go read your fics to end my day on a good note x3!
have a good day! and keep it up the good work x3!
P-S: okay, I ramble too much XDDD
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was one hell of an intense chapter, i knew there was going to be violence, but no so soon. Damn yuuri really lost it there. I love it, more wolf bashing in the future i hope, god i'm horroble! the heir matter was really unexpected and i find myself as upset as yuuri. Rape by faraya seems more acceptable, than willingly sleeping with a woman, and have a baby, ewwww! But i most comend wolf in his sneaky attempt. Yup Gwendal would make one hell of an enemy, poor conrart having to witness such a scene. I agree with yuuri in the artificial insemination, and to hell with tradition. Murata is an inteligent man, and knows exactly how to handle yuuri, though i question how much is he a yuuri's subordinate, Murata is much more than that in my opinion but oh well. okay now we all know that yuuri is mighty pissed, but what about wolf's thoughts and feelings in how this matter has turned out. And how long will he keep alowing yuuri to hit him like that, you know what i find funny, i can't clearly see in my head what just happened in this chapter, yuuri loosing it and hitting wolf, but i can't summon the reverse image, i can't picture wolfram getting so angry that he'd actually punch yuuri in the face, fire balls don't count, they might as well their pain makes me feel all warm inside. yeah, yeah i know its not all about faraya, but if thats yuuri's reaction to the "entrusted lady" all hell will break loose when he finds out about the rape, oh and i forgot to mention in the last chapter that i love that little new acquared tendensi, of needing to know thats actually yuuri whos pounding him from behind. there was something else i wanted to mention but i don't remember it.... what was it.... fuck it, its way to late *glace at watch* or early to think too much, if anything i'll writte again, ja ne. ps oh i love all the cursing yuuri did, specially he used my fav "jesus fucking christ" though i always add on a "bloody cross", after that particular phrase, but i feel so proud of his curseing, and he scolds wolfram for cussing. well later!
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
2 punches in 24 hours OUCH. but he deserved it. After all he put Yuuri through at the beginning of their relationship you would think he would be a little bit more understanding. I want to see more of what happens. Its to bad Gisela cant do a "magic" version of artificial insemination combined with Anissina I bet they could come up with something. And, does this mean that Yuuri gets to look around also. He should, maybe they should look into a lady to carry twins one for each of them. excellent as always waiting for the next chapter
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting turn. This is definitely a curveball because everyone was still hung up on "the rape".
I can see why some people commenting might have a problem with violence etc, and of course nothing excuses abuse, but personally I think it is extremeley realistical for people to simply loose it at times. heh... I've been at the receiving and giving end of it. Crying sometimes is not enough, especially when everythink is out of your own hands. And people must remember that in some cultures an event is more/less taboo then in others.
What I particularly liked about this chapter were two things. First, I like to see that Shin Makoku despite this great magic etc. is NOT made out to be some "Garden of Eden" where happiness grows on trees. You can have advances in one way [progressive on same-sex relationships] but prejudice on power-holding etc. The idea that all civilizations must got through trials and tribulations to achieve more prosperity is very appealing to me.
Secondly, I enjoyed that despite Shin Makoku being a backwater country, people are still shown as having pride in their lives even when faced with a polar opposite [Wolfram's attitutde while on earth is wonderful!!!]. Wolfram might understand that Yuuri is hurt, but he also has pride in his name/family/country hence he won't back down from wanting a child. And just as Yuri can feel affronted in his marriage, so Gwendal has a right to feel affronted by Yuuri not accepting his family's prinicples. etc.
ugh.. anyways, sorry for the lengthy review.
Until next time ^^
I can see why some people commenting might have a problem with violence etc, and of course nothing excuses abuse, but personally I think it is extremeley realistical for people to simply loose it at times. heh... I've been at the receiving and giving end of it. Crying sometimes is not enough, especially when everythink is out of your own hands. And people must remember that in some cultures an event is more/less taboo then in others.
What I particularly liked about this chapter were two things. First, I like to see that Shin Makoku despite this great magic etc. is NOT made out to be some "Garden of Eden" where happiness grows on trees. You can have advances in one way [progressive on same-sex relationships] but prejudice on power-holding etc. The idea that all civilizations must got through trials and tribulations to achieve more prosperity is very appealing to me.
Secondly, I enjoyed that despite Shin Makoku being a backwater country, people are still shown as having pride in their lives even when faced with a polar opposite [Wolfram's attitutde while on earth is wonderful!!!]. Wolfram might understand that Yuuri is hurt, but he also has pride in his name/family/country hence he won't back down from wanting a child. And just as Yuri can feel affronted in his marriage, so Gwendal has a right to feel affronted by Yuuri not accepting his family's prinicples. etc.
ugh.. anyways, sorry for the lengthy review.
Until next time ^^
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, first I have to say that I am a bad, bad reader...I have absolutely LOVED your KKM fics (WOTP, WoftGE, and if you have any more then I'd love to know), and I've never left a review. *ducks head in shame* >_< I have no good reason (I fear what authors will think of my reviews...haha...hence why I don't even attempt fanfiction). However, I honestly have to say that WOTP is probably my fav KKM fanfic of everything I've ever read (and I've read ALOT of them), and I figured I should stop being a *wimp* for at least your fics. Okay, enough of guilty monologue...
I think my favorite aspect of your fics is your originality - after reading so many fanfics, it's hard to find something that is *completely* unique and exciting. All three of your KKM fics have been totally unpredictable, and I've always been amazed at the things you come up with to drive your plots forward (i.e. Kyota - awesome OC, power swapping, new worlds!, Faraya, Wolfram's Near-death and Yuuri's awesome re-entrance at the end of WoftGE, and now an Entrusted Lady). You are incredible at keeping your readers on edge - mad props to you! ^_^
And then there's the sex...you write very hot sex. period. You should never be ashamed of the scenes you've written for your KKM fanfics - I may have to hit you on the head if you ever say otherwise...I'm just sooooo happy that you are writing about Yuuri and Wolfram (my all-time FAV OTP)!! I find your scenes to be very realistic, not overly mushy, and exciting. There's always a new aspect to each of your scenes that makes each scene distinct from the others - i.e. you're not repetitive. Thank you soooo much for that!
I love how strong Wolfram is in your fics - an uke-Wolfram is fun to read at times, but there are only so many plot designs an author can use and that results in very little fic diversity. Wolfram is my absolute FAV KKM character, and it's awesome to see him strong, intelligent, skilled, and just *to die for.*
Okay, so those are the top reasons why I love your fics. Moving to "Inexorable Flow"...the first thing that made me smile was knowing that Wolfram rides a motorcycle - HOT, HOT, HOT! Then, there was the out-of-the-blue attack on Wolfram. I'm very curious to see where that's going, and it definitely threw me off of the true nature of Wolfram's "issues." Carrying on the bloodline...not expecting that at all. You did a great job of describing just how jealous Yuuri is at this point in their relationship, and the buildup made this particular turn-of-events all the more shocking. Oh God, I think I'll cry if Yuuri and Wolfram aren't together at the end of this story...though I can see you breaking them apart for some of it, and then I'll be biting my nails waiting and hoping that they'll be together again in the end. I think I might also cringe when/if you write a sex scene with Wolfram and a female (and I was definitely bitter when Faraya had sex with Wolfram). That will be a hard one to sit through.
The "rock, papaer, scissors" was hilarious, and Asami's reaction was perfect! And the handcuffs were a nice spicy addition to the sex. ^_^ The beginning of Chap 5 is so cute with Wolfram having to say "meow" for help. I can totally picture Wolfram's sarcasm.
So Faraya's not coming in until much later, huh? And I'm dying to know if Yuuri will find out about Faraya and Wolfram. Poor Yuuri...first the heir thing, and if he finds out about Faraya, he could be totally disillusioned with Wolfram even though it's not Wolfram's fault. Oh God, the angst!
I'll stop now b/c this review is super-long. Can't wait to see the next chap, and thank you so much for sharing!!
I think my favorite aspect of your fics is your originality - after reading so many fanfics, it's hard to find something that is *completely* unique and exciting. All three of your KKM fics have been totally unpredictable, and I've always been amazed at the things you come up with to drive your plots forward (i.e. Kyota - awesome OC, power swapping, new worlds!, Faraya, Wolfram's Near-death and Yuuri's awesome re-entrance at the end of WoftGE, and now an Entrusted Lady). You are incredible at keeping your readers on edge - mad props to you! ^_^
And then there's the sex...you write very hot sex. period. You should never be ashamed of the scenes you've written for your KKM fanfics - I may have to hit you on the head if you ever say otherwise...I'm just sooooo happy that you are writing about Yuuri and Wolfram (my all-time FAV OTP)!! I find your scenes to be very realistic, not overly mushy, and exciting. There's always a new aspect to each of your scenes that makes each scene distinct from the others - i.e. you're not repetitive. Thank you soooo much for that!
I love how strong Wolfram is in your fics - an uke-Wolfram is fun to read at times, but there are only so many plot designs an author can use and that results in very little fic diversity. Wolfram is my absolute FAV KKM character, and it's awesome to see him strong, intelligent, skilled, and just *to die for.*
Okay, so those are the top reasons why I love your fics. Moving to "Inexorable Flow"...the first thing that made me smile was knowing that Wolfram rides a motorcycle - HOT, HOT, HOT! Then, there was the out-of-the-blue attack on Wolfram. I'm very curious to see where that's going, and it definitely threw me off of the true nature of Wolfram's "issues." Carrying on the bloodline...not expecting that at all. You did a great job of describing just how jealous Yuuri is at this point in their relationship, and the buildup made this particular turn-of-events all the more shocking. Oh God, I think I'll cry if Yuuri and Wolfram aren't together at the end of this story...though I can see you breaking them apart for some of it, and then I'll be biting my nails waiting and hoping that they'll be together again in the end. I think I might also cringe when/if you write a sex scene with Wolfram and a female (and I was definitely bitter when Faraya had sex with Wolfram). That will be a hard one to sit through.
The "rock, papaer, scissors" was hilarious, and Asami's reaction was perfect! And the handcuffs were a nice spicy addition to the sex. ^_^ The beginning of Chap 5 is so cute with Wolfram having to say "meow" for help. I can totally picture Wolfram's sarcasm.
So Faraya's not coming in until much later, huh? And I'm dying to know if Yuuri will find out about Faraya and Wolfram. Poor Yuuri...first the heir thing, and if he finds out about Faraya, he could be totally disillusioned with Wolfram even though it's not Wolfram's fault. Oh God, the angst!
I'll stop now b/c this review is super-long. Can't wait to see the next chap, and thank you so much for sharing!!
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I discovered your stories late (you already published two chapters of IF, when I started reading WotP..), but better late than ever! ^^ I like that you take you time to develope a plot line (yes, I totally love epic stories). There are not many good KKM stories out there, but you managed to pull it off. You take a different path from the common ff-direction. I like the use of OCs, since you are able to create them with a real personality and the ability to develope throughout the story.
Now to IF: After the 5th chapter I understand Wolf's behaviour and the innuendoes of adultery. He should really have talked to Yuuri. Nothing about cheating is as worst as being catched. Telling the truth is always the better solution. Now Wolfram has to deal with his husband'S anger for lying as well as his jealousy.. what a mess. But I went O.o when Yuuri kept hitting Wolfram.. get a grip of yourself for god's sake!! I don't want to see how he reacts to the rape... in his current state of mind he probably won't even believe that is was rape. Maybe he will accuse Wolfram of wanting Faraya T_T
I can't wait for a meeting between Amae and Kyota. There were interesting together.
Keep the good work up! My regards, Ivy
I discovered your stories late (you already published two chapters of IF, when I started reading WotP..), but better late than ever! ^^ I like that you take you time to develope a plot line (yes, I totally love epic stories). There are not many good KKM stories out there, but you managed to pull it off. You take a different path from the common ff-direction. I like the use of OCs, since you are able to create them with a real personality and the ability to develope throughout the story.
Now to IF: After the 5th chapter I understand Wolf's behaviour and the innuendoes of adultery. He should really have talked to Yuuri. Nothing about cheating is as worst as being catched. Telling the truth is always the better solution. Now Wolfram has to deal with his husband'S anger for lying as well as his jealousy.. what a mess. But I went O.o when Yuuri kept hitting Wolfram.. get a grip of yourself for god's sake!! I don't want to see how he reacts to the rape... in his current state of mind he probably won't even believe that is was rape. Maybe he will accuse Wolfram of wanting Faraya T_T
I can't wait for a meeting between Amae and Kyota. There were interesting together.
Keep the good work up! My regards, Ivy
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wolfram got hit. *sobs*
(of course, it was his own fault for keeping something that big from Yuuri...but still T_T)
&thank you very much for the explaination & this chapter. Its all beginning to make more since now. ;]
(of course, it was his own fault for keeping something that big from Yuuri...but still T_T)
&thank you very much for the explaination & this chapter. Its all beginning to make more since now. ;]
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Meow… It’s the BEST XD imagine Wolf say meow *grin* Aha, so lovely… :3
Wolfram lying son of a bitch! Hahaha no one expect this from him ) Pplz don’t sign documents when you drunk *devil grin* Well if Wolfram need Bielefeld heir? Then Yuuri need Shibuya heir too… XD Anyway, good story ^^
Wolfram lying son of a bitch! Hahaha no one expect this from him ) Pplz don’t sign documents when you drunk *devil grin* Well if Wolfram need Bielefeld heir? Then Yuuri need Shibuya heir too… XD Anyway, good story ^^