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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can we propose this story to the Bible Black producers for their latest instalment in the series?
Seriously, man, you did it! You've perfectly captured the spirit of Bible Black in this story. The magic, the fetishes, the obsession with the past... you managed to write something that feels like another genuine Bible Black experience. I especially liked Imari and Saeki's interaction with each other, you've given them (IMO) better personality developments than the BB New Testament episodes. Good job on explaining the demon's background info too--it fits well with Bible Black's proximity to religious ideas.
One minor complaint would be about someone named Yung-hi Cheung designated as Thai... her name is more Cantonese than Thai, so an exchange student from Hong Kong might be a better description for her. Or get a more Thai-sounding name if she needs to stay as Little Brown Fuck Machine.
Oh, and I wonder if you'd be interested in writing something like this for Bible Black's 'sister', Discipline...
Seriously, man, you did it! You've perfectly captured the spirit of Bible Black in this story. The magic, the fetishes, the obsession with the past... you managed to write something that feels like another genuine Bible Black experience. I especially liked Imari and Saeki's interaction with each other, you've given them (IMO) better personality developments than the BB New Testament episodes. Good job on explaining the demon's background info too--it fits well with Bible Black's proximity to religious ideas.
One minor complaint would be about someone named Yung-hi Cheung designated as Thai... her name is more Cantonese than Thai, so an exchange student from Hong Kong might be a better description for her. Or get a more Thai-sounding name if she needs to stay as Little Brown Fuck Machine.
Oh, and I wonder if you'd be interested in writing something like this for Bible Black's 'sister', Discipline...