rate_review Reviews

that was beautiful, im amazed with your sense of detail

Just read the first chap. and to tell you the truth, it made me cry I FUCK'N HATE GOJYO AND HAKKAI RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!! What they did to Sanzo was unforgiveable. Raping and beating him, how could they do such a thing. And, NOW GOJYO REGRETS WHAT HE DID!?!?!? Like that is going to change anything, Sanzo, his dead inside and nothing is going to change that. Gojyo better work fuck'n hard to make this just a little bit right, because I DON'T WANT TO HATE HIM!!!!!!!*pouts* BUT, I DO LIKE THE STORY SO FAR SEE YOU AGAIN AFTER I READ THE NEXT PART.

OK you had me crying again, plus I nearly had a heart attack, when Sanzo slit his wrists and Gojyo tried to slit his throat. DAMN, the goddess messed up, they all got their memories back all because Goku told them about what happened two weeks ago. Hell, she should have took his away too, then this wouldn't of happened. I still like the story though, is it done or is there more???? I HOPE THERE IS BECAUSE THEY NEED A HAPPY ENDING, FOR CRYING-OUT-LOUD!!!!!*sobs*