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Aw MEAN!!! This story is awsome but where's the rest??????? You should have your name in the deathnote for not continuing this. Excellent work the characters were near perfect, the plot was wonderful, loved it but right now I don't care for you for having not finished writing this masterpiece.

How could yo uleave the people with such a HUGE cliffhanger do you know this story was reccomended to me atleast a year ago and I finished reading it just to find out it's not finished. Either way it's really good I love how well this is written minus a few mistakes no big deal the characters are so good they pull me in and I don't feel like I'm sitting in a computer chair reading I feel like I'm right in there filming a really good movie or mini tv special loves it. Shame it's not being updated but what you have I've enjoyed tremendously. Im always gonna be a Kira supporter everytime I see the news I'm gonna wish death notes really existed.

I LOVE YOU!!!
This story is simply amazing :D You don't have a fanfiction.net account do you? Coz if it's on there, I will definitely fave it :)
But I do hope you plan on updating, because I've noticed that this story hasn't been updated for over a year... PLEASE DON'T GIVE UP!!!!
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Lol I actually think Raito deserves some pain for being such an ass to L all the time :D Maybe now's the time to steal the deathnote away from him and burn it? XD

needless to say its genius, I can't express it enough and may the reviews never have a limit because you'll be getting praise for this for a long time, I'm sure.

Hi :)

Your work is as brilliant as always, but I thought I'd point out a small inconsistancy. At one point in this chapter (4) you mentioned that "Aizawa stared at MELLO, before turning and leaving..." whereas I think you meant Near :D Nothing big or anything, but it might confuse someone.

Enjoying the story immensely, thank you for your effort and time you put into it :D:D:D

aaah my darling we've met once before in Good night moon- I think. I'm not sure anyway I love your work its never a disappointment and how you say you're unsure about Mello and Matt and Near without a hint of but man I'm the shit in there is the best I hate arrogant writers. I've been so busy its pissing me off because I only made it through chapter 3 when I could read this straight through. Write more, write like your hands command it. I love Death Note too much to just be satisfied with two stories from the best writer in this section. You inspire me to improve on the one I've done- its not in here yet but once I get done with something else I'm working on it will be. See ya. Fantasy of the shared authors Linkin Fantasy

I noticed that the site lists this story as having been last updated half a year ago. I hope you are planing on continuing this story though. =( It's beautiful.

So, I hope you haven't lost interest in continuing this fic. It would be depressing as I've taken Goodnight Moon and the sequel to be what Ohba had actually intended, and to not know what happens at the end of Death Note would, well, suck. I know you said in your profile something along the lines of "however long [your interest in writing fics] lasts," I just hope you haven't run out of motivation yet.
Let me wave my little fangirl pom poms for ya. *rah rah*
I love your writing style, and your ability to make the story unpredictable and keep everyone in character makes my jaw drop. I've re-read the fic a couple of times already, and I gotta say its definitely one of my top DN fics.
Oh! And another chapter of Arcadia would be spastically appreciated, but I'm already crossing my fingers for the next chapter of TYA as it is, so I'm not gonna beg for too much. I'll just throw this little puppy eyes thing at ya o_o