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by Duomi

schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, this worked out great. Perfect introduction to a new phase of the tale. Good work, and great characterization again! ^^ I can't tell you how pleased I am that it's not over, really, lol.
person Kira Douji
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Other than to dryly point out that my name is rather ironic at this point, it's 5am and my mind is broken (heh, that's the way I finished the manga too? :P) so this is just in place to say "I'm coming back, and I'm bringing a wall of text" ... once I get some sleep << >>

- Kira
... (lol)
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh nicely done on posting so fast! *casually looks around for L, quickly hands cookie from hidden box*

For some insane reason I liked Mello in this. Normally I can't stand the little twerp and Near makes me want to hit him with a rubber bat that's not made of rubber but is instead made up of a giant demon monster that will eat his soul and then devour his still twitching corpse.

>.>

Man...shush. It's like really late and I've just updated - this nervous energy has to go somewhere!

But yeah, good to see it's up so quickly! I like that Matt is the voice of reason and i absolutely LOVED his analogy of Mello suddenly being the main character and all that - it made me want to copy/paste it to read later to make me laugh. Look forward to more!

OMGWTF Where's my COOKIES?!
-points to Duomi and flees-
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! I'm so glad you're writing a sequel to Goodnight Moon, and with Mello and Matt in it to boot! This is the ultimate. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :D
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wonderful! I'm so glad you made the sequel. I loved Goodnight Moon and didn't want it to end just yet. Not that I'm a lustful horndog or anything (well, maybe just a bit), can we expect any more LxLight scenes? Whatever your plan, I can't wait to read more!
person Dotowe
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM




Lol, I just finished reviewing Goodnight Moon when I realized that you had posted the first chapter of the sequel. I'm sooooo excited. And am thrilled that you're playing with Matt! Cannot wait for the next chapter!

Joie,
Gloria

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