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Hello again. This review is late I actually read it yesterday but due to unforseen circumstances I was kicked from the computer and forced to go without, but I enjoyed this chapter even though there was no Light and L it's ok. And yes I am quite fluent with both G.D.D and S.R. they are my favorite DN artists. But yes I will continue to work onthe drawing I have decided on the genius chess scene and I will submit it to DA when it's finished.Till next time....

-L

Sorry, I didn't mean to review twice. The stupid thing was messing up when I was trying to review. I didn't know if it had sent the review or not so I did it again. Poor Sayu, it's got to be hard on the poor girl when she finds out that her role model big brother turns out to be a killer. I hope that things turn out in the end and no one end up getting killed, but mainly L and Kira. I love those two. I wonder how L is going to take the broadcast when he finds out.

Sayu amuses me. I'm quite interested in how you're going to make Light respond to this. hrm.
I could never really figure out if Light actually loves his little sister. Ok wait, I take that back, I wouldn't go as far as to say "love" but he does care for her to an extent? (or perhaps he just feigns that too...? I mean, he DID kill his dad ;__;)
Ahrm...

More please. :D

Aww no Kira and L but that's okay - I understand it's nessesary! Haha! Good on you for including Sayu! She's one of those characters that's only really brought out for terrible porn (mostly involving Ryukuu for some reason :s, but to each their own..). I liked that she didn't take shit from Near and beat his little albino ass within 5 seconds of meeting him! Made me laugh.

I think my absolute favorite part of this chapter was Soichiro's description of Raito as a young child. I liked that his mum went 'oh he was perfect child...' then his dad was like 'uh...actually dear..." But absolutely loved the description. Very In Character and would explain a lot about 'our young man, Yagami-kun.'

Keep it up, looking foward to the next chapter (as always!) I keep meaning to paint you something - but it just seems to...I dunno...just getting a picture of it on the net doesn't seem to express my thankful-ness properly haha, I'd send you the actual canvas if I could - but Kami (*Mikami pops up* WHERE?! KAMI?!) knows how much it would costa nd I would be terrified of it getting damaged :S But the thought is there! :D:D

I adore Nightwish. I don't have any of their CDs (sadly), but an author friend of mine, who can't post here, loves them and is trying her hardest to gather all their CDs. She's only missing a few (she has five of their CDs so far) what she's missing is Oceanborn and Over the Hills and Far Away EP. You know, I recommend that you use one of their songs for a chapter title at some point.

As for those PWPs, I'm not sure yet. *frowns* I've been reading more fanfiction lately than I've been writing; kind of sad. And I've taken an interest in vampire fanfiction, again, so I'm thinking about doing a Death Note one. What do you think? I'd like feedback on it. The PWPs are Tales of Legendia and maybe Bleach. XP

I still don't like Near that much; perhaps I'm bias because of that Near-loathing friend I have... she goes off on long rants about how much she loathes him. Sort of amusing, but it heavily affects my opinion of him. So you have your work cut out for you to actually get me to like him. All the best of luck on that.

Other than that... there aren't many female Death Note characters, and that makes me sad. *pouts* I've even debated creating my own, in fact, I'm going to borrow my friend's alter ego for that. Just because I like the character design for it and the personality of her is funny. She's bland, blunt, a hacker, enjoys pocky, and drinks tea rather than coffee. So, I want to write for her very much. It can be an early birthday present for her.

So, I liked your characterization of Sayu! Lovely! I'm looking forward to seeing more! One question: are we ever going to see our adorable uke-ish Light again?!

Viridian Kat.

Yep, this one is definitely as intersting, if not more so, as 'Goodnight Moon'. It has intrigue, humor, a little action (lawlz with Kira and L in both ways XD, just basically everything a good story needs. Kudos on creating such a well flowing story. I'm kind of envious, really XD

Well, can't wait to keep seeing what happens next!

Supporting Kira X L always,
Kiyoshi Tamakashi (AKA: Kiyo-chan)

Chapter 7

Awwwwwww~~ Update soon? Prease? I have to know what happens. ♥

I think that Near is underestimating L and Kira. He'll believe that they'll be caught soon. I don't think he realizes yet just how big a threat both of them together is. Both of them are genius's after all. It'll take more than that to catch them. Now it's kinda like a game of cat and mouse and catch me if you can. You gotta feel bad for Light's family though.

Chapter 4

Meromero and ono-whatever are hilarious. I love your characterization of Matsuda (I generally hate him, for what he did in the end of the manga. ;A;) Poor Mello. XDD

Mm... I like how Near's so damn childish. I sorta quit reading the manga after L died; couldn't bring myself too, so I don't know too much about Mello, Near, and Matt. Though I get the 'I Despise Near' rant from my friend and the love for Matt from my other friend. Very amusing. Only the latter thinks I'm crazy for liking yaoi/shonen-ai; but hey, she's from Texas. Still, I was born in Japan and raised for twelve years in Alberta before moving to Ontario. Alberta's pretty conservative; and she's even more so! Kinda funny...

Well it's after midnight here, on a school night; and I'm writing PWPs. Any ideas or suggestions for one? I feel like writing pointless porn right now...

You know a band that goes well with Death Note? Nightwish. Go listen to some of their stuff; it's excellent.

Viridian Kat.