rate_review Reviews

My favourite pair! This was a delight to read--you wrote it SO well! HAR! K's greedy character was amusing in this card game one-shot. But, I liked how K gave Hiro a choice...very nice. I knew I should have checked out AFF sooner, its been too long...I'm glad I stopped by to find your fic.

SO yummy! Thanks!

Hmm very nice, Though I am not a KxHiro fan so much but it was nice! But I don't know how much Discription you really wanted to put into it because you were discribing the card game alot but didn't discribe what K's house looked like didn't do to much on the sroudings. We never knew what K's bed room looked like or his bed we were left up to imagtions but if that was what you were going for good job haha. I have a good imagtintion.

Also Did Hiro and K get together or was it a one night stand that was never cleared up in the end I kind of wanna know!

But good writing and lots of Big words hahaha

Duo

I have never watched or read Gravitation(but I have heard of it and know what some of the characters look like), but I wanted to read it anyway. I wanted to read another fic of yours, so I did. And I must say that I was and am right about you--you're an excellent writer! You're very descritive and obviously have a talent for the written word.

I'm pretty sure this Hiro enjoyed himself that night with the guy K. It was funny at the end when Hiro tried to weasel out of it and K reminded him that he has him for the whole night. ^^

Well, I do hope you write more InuYasha fics or whatever else that interests you. I'd say, maybe you could do an original slash/yaoi story. I'll bet you could.

Oh, and don't take my review to ur InuYasha story personally. I was just poking fun and defending SesshUKE at the same time. *pokes you* You better write more, ya hear?

Owariness for now...

Your writing has greatly improved since the first Gravitation story I've read! Its great to see the changes!

The story is cute and sexy and allaround great! I especially liked the end!

Great job! Keep up the good work!

EIRI-CHICK
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i bet he cheated hiro has to get back his own it was great

I love this pair!!! Cute story, Great job Demon Lady!