rate_review Reviews

I just finished reading the chapters of black lamb and am anxious for more. I love your take on raito and cant wait to see him meet L.
Hope to see more soon.

about #4...

I just came across your story..or mini graphic novel..today and was glad I finally
got into the swing of how you write.

Question: since I haven't read the manga yet, I've noticed people mention this
name but, unfortunately, it's not mentioned in the anime. Who IS Beyond? What
type of person is he and what did he do?

HOLY SWEET JESUS!! You are on par with Nilahxapiel!!! I love how you write, I love your ideas and I can't wait until you not only update this, but put up those other SWEET ASS stories you have planned as well!!! UPDATE NOW OR AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!! PLEASE!!!!

...I can't tell you how annoyed I was when I moved my mouse to where the "next chapter" usually is...
...and found none.
Do you have any idea how annoying that feeling is?
I WANT TO READ MORE!!!!!
...and trust me, for a story to captivate me so much that I tweak out when I realize there isn't any more yet...it's rare. Sometimes I'll feel sad, or disgruntled...but this full-fledged tweak of annoyance means something.

IT MEANS YOU HAD BETTER WRITE MORE SOON!

Another amazing chapter.

This is unfolding really well.

I loved this chapter. Raito's first crime. I can't wait for L and Raito to meet. Very interesting that the one Death note already changed hands. I can't wait to read more.
=)

Oi...i thought i couldn't review your stories else you would have one per chapter....hmmmm have i lost my mind or did you change the setting thing maybe?....Anyway won't think on it too long :) i can now review your awesome work XD.....So wow interesting twist here characters are very realistic although L seems a bit more human in your story...Not bad but just a little different....Anyway Raito is dead on for the background you've given him i feel like i can understand his personality a whole lot better than i did before Yay....Anyway i was totally caught off guard by his telling Ryuk they were running away i was like WTF!?! Anyway that was thouroughly explained in the next chapter i guess that yes it's a way to end being boring and bored at the same time heh cool! Love what you're doing with the Shinigami giving them all food interests and a bit of personality makes it more believeable...Then Raitos' hindsight is 20/20 moment was interesting as well...because him realizing that doing the whole thing without a little more preparation was not good for his plan was totally Raito. Him being the smart guy that he is he would of course review his past steps before planning for his future steps...I am a Ryuk lover for this fic because he is just sooo funny the diversion tactic priceless!!!...T_T....back to Raito the apple tasting of sin hmmm might Raito be heading down a slippery slope toward use of death Note?...In my very biased opinion I really hope he doesn't use the deathnote that's something i really like about this story. First one i've ever read where he is able to resist using it in the first place...very Original and refreshingly unique..... Anyway awesome story so far can't wait for the next installent but your really good about that stuff so no worries on my part :).......*cracks knuckles then clicks on next Story by ChanceXIII clicks review button (grins) Tappa Tappa*

Wow, that last line was really something. <3
I find the idea of Raito stealing very amusing. It's a interesting concept to be introducing to the story. XD
*WAITS FOR SAIYUKI FIC UPDATE*
ahrm
XD

I loved the third chapter... so many death notes... that's bound to make L's head spin like crazy. =D

And I'm still wondering what will happen with Light...

This is absolutely one of THE best stories I've ever read, and I've read alot, at that. This is really excellent writing, and Ryuk's POV is hilairious! I have completely and utterly fallen in love with this series, and can't wait for you to update more. Patience is a virtue... but then again, I'm no angel, so...

CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, DAMMIT!!!

Lawlz, I'm just playing , of course....

Lots os support and more power to ya,
Kiyoshi Tamakashi (AKA:Kiyo-chan)