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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a beautiful story. I've actually re-read it a few times now and didn't review (I'm so bad!). I love all of the Generals and Senshi, but my favorite are Venus/Malachite. I am glad that I got to see his reaction to her pregnancy, but now I'd like to see what happens next! I'm hoping the author gets this notification and sees that we are still reading and enjoying this story and will update. Much love! <3
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am relatively new to the world of fanfiction, but so far, a lot of what I've read is...not very well written, to put it nicely.
This story, however, is not one of those. There are occasional spelling/grammar errors (even printed books are not free from those) but not the chronic type that are distracting and make the narrative difficult to follow.
I am so enthralled by this story; it is original and captivating. So when I checked to see when it was last updated (last March or something) I was so sad. I really, sincerely hope that the author is inspired to finish/continue the story. I'll be so disappointed if I don't get to find out what happens next. :]
Also, I think is worth mentioning that this is the first fanfic that I have felt compelled to review. Another indication of how much I liked it.
(Also being new, I'm unsure about whether reviews should be addressed to other readers or to the author? Hmm, awkward.)
This story, however, is not one of those. There are occasional spelling/grammar errors (even printed books are not free from those) but not the chronic type that are distracting and make the narrative difficult to follow.
I am so enthralled by this story; it is original and captivating. So when I checked to see when it was last updated (last March or something) I was so sad. I really, sincerely hope that the author is inspired to finish/continue the story. I'll be so disappointed if I don't get to find out what happens next. :]
Also, I think is worth mentioning that this is the first fanfic that I have felt compelled to review. Another indication of how much I liked it.
(Also being new, I'm unsure about whether reviews should be addressed to other readers or to the author? Hmm, awkward.)
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. I LOVE your creative new approach on the history of the Silver Millennium. Your writing really flows well- it's very descriptive and blissfully free of spelling and grammatical errors. I just finished reading the most recent chapter and can't wait for more. Keep up the good work :3
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it. and i can't wait for the next chapters.
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ihope yu update soon so far my favorite chrachters are mina malachite and of course serenity and darien i love how yuo take your time it makes the story worth reading keep up the good work
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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello ^^
I just wanted to say that I really love your story Silver Alliance so far.
I really love how you are going into detail for every couple and their problems and it's really interesting to see a good story in the background and that there is a development in the characters.
It's kinda funny because I just published 3 chapters of one of my stories and it has some parallels to your story ... well just that they have to marry but because of different reasons and in my story the war was before the story itself and I also let Haruka, Michiru and Setsuna marry but I also want to describe their lifes but I'm only at the beginning so nothing really has happened yet than the mothers talking and planing XD" ... I would really like you to read it but it's in german because I'm from Germany and I don't know if you can understand my language or if you would be interested in it. ^^"
Oh yeah ... sorry if my english is a little ... broken xD" like I said I'm from Germany ...
Ehm .. I'm talking to much xD" I just wanted to say how great your story is and that I'm looking for a new chapter everyday because I'm so eager to read more.
So ... real good work and I hope that there will be new chapters soon.
Bye, Osabu.
I just wanted to say that I really love your story Silver Alliance so far.
I really love how you are going into detail for every couple and their problems and it's really interesting to see a good story in the background and that there is a development in the characters.
It's kinda funny because I just published 3 chapters of one of my stories and it has some parallels to your story ... well just that they have to marry but because of different reasons and in my story the war was before the story itself and I also let Haruka, Michiru and Setsuna marry but I also want to describe their lifes but I'm only at the beginning so nothing really has happened yet than the mothers talking and planing XD" ... I would really like you to read it but it's in german because I'm from Germany and I don't know if you can understand my language or if you would be interested in it. ^^"
Oh yeah ... sorry if my english is a little ... broken xD" like I said I'm from Germany ...
Ehm .. I'm talking to much xD" I just wanted to say how great your story is and that I'm looking for a new chapter everyday because I'm so eager to read more.
So ... real good work and I hope that there will be new chapters soon.
Bye, Osabu.
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow is all i can say i love this story and cant wait for it to be updated
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude! I read this on another site and I was so disappointed when I got to the end and found out it haded been finished... I'm looking forward to more! ^_^ I hope you update soon.
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! I enjoyed your story. I'm looking forward to more.
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I just started reading this story, and I find that I am hooked. Great story line, hope to be able to read the next chapter soon. :)