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"Any straight guy would be very envious of this situation" Got that one right Kyon you lucky bastard xD

i really got into this one quickly: Haruhi's persona was right down to the T, Kyon wouldve been easy i imagine (any guy in that situation is easy to describe xD) and as always Mikuru made her appeal and kept in character while we got some surprises with how into it she was getting ;P the fic itself seemed more comical just like the series tends to be before getting right to it. all in all i sure like it xD hope you get back to writing more of Haruhi Suzumiya, maybe even include Tsuruya? shes my favorite of the girls and my all favorite anime/manga female but sadly she never seems to get many roles in fics...

keep at it! ^-^

Most interesting. I've only seen one other fic like this, i believe, which was a Golden Sun one. This put the relationship between these characters in a very different light. I enjoyed it and think you did a good job.

The super-stereotypical descriptions of the sex make the scenes more comical than arousing. I just can't take anything seriously if it's talking about "trouser snakes" and "love tunnels." But that's a shame, because the idea you have here is really good. Haruhi likes both of them, and I could pretty easily imagine her pulling something like this.