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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I really like Tot and I'm glad you included her in such way.
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very nice beginning to what I hope will be a long and suspenseful story. A couple of missing letters at the beginning but nonetheless, you pegged Schuldig's and Ken's attitudes perfectly. Kudos on a job very well done!
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was just wonderfully written! I read the first version but this is far more emotional. Keep up the great work and sorry for the short review - I'm using my ps3 as a computer.
have a great day!!!
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no you just stopped there,it was very good. More please!
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hurry up with the next chapter,'cause I want to know who they saved!
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This sounds interesting!