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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow so just about the entire team is fully evolved and Slash can talk with them I can’t wait until this happens in main story.
I kind suspected early on in this story that Slash was going to ask Psymaiko to marry him but still when he asked her it caught me a bit off guard.
The part where Arcanine woke them up was funny as hell but I wish there had been a bit more about the lovemaking before hand.
I was kind of pissed about the comment of what happened in Fallarbor because I’ve been dyeing to find out what will happen and I get the feeling that the Shadow may have something to do with the storm.
I’ve seen a picture of a Gardevoir in a wedding dress before but I know that Psymaiko would look so much better in it.
And I think it’s just a tad funny for wedding dresses to be whit in the first place most women aren’t virgins by the time there married anymore but of course in the case of Psymaiko even if she was deflowered a while back she’s still very pure and innocent so white is the perfect color for her.
I had never thought about this before but Slash is not only into bestiality but he’s also a pedophile man that’s kind of messed up in a way but Psymaiko is more mature than most humans in there twenties but still…
I couldn’t help but feel sorry for Watson I know what it’s like to lose the love of your life and to have only memoirs but at least he has them even if anything happens to them at least they’d have given him a few more happy memories because that is on of the best things you can give someone even after someone is gone from this world they’ll live on in the heart and souls of their loved ones.
The ceremony was heartwarming it was just so sweat it almost made me fall in love with sash because his lines were just so romantic and beautiful and touching but than Psymaiko had her say and it caused me to fall head over heels for her all over again.
And as for when the ceremony was over I just loved how Psymaiko was talking I love when she talks dirty there is just something about it that gets to in a special way…in my pants. But the actual sex scene that was just unfair I mean teasing her and us like that. No fair. I mean she was begging and rushing him to hurry up.
Of course it was well wroth the build up that was on of the best sex scenes I’ve read since well the last Sinners one shot it was so hot and passionate and loving I just cant describe exactly how it made me fell other than pleasant.
And the last thing I have to say is that when I first saw Sinners posted I thought it was going to just be some story about a guy having sex with a Pokemon which didn’t really appeal to me very much at the time but out of boredom I began reading it an it quickly become one of my all time favorite stories of all time I’m sure that even after the story is over and done with it will still entrain and inspire people for years.
I know that there’s no grantee of a happy ending in fact I except the ending to be fairly said but I still look forward to it and this story gives me some hope that maybe things wont be to bad after all is said and down.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
I kind suspected early on in this story that Slash was going to ask Psymaiko to marry him but still when he asked her it caught me a bit off guard.
The part where Arcanine woke them up was funny as hell but I wish there had been a bit more about the lovemaking before hand.
I was kind of pissed about the comment of what happened in Fallarbor because I’ve been dyeing to find out what will happen and I get the feeling that the Shadow may have something to do with the storm.
I’ve seen a picture of a Gardevoir in a wedding dress before but I know that Psymaiko would look so much better in it.
And I think it’s just a tad funny for wedding dresses to be whit in the first place most women aren’t virgins by the time there married anymore but of course in the case of Psymaiko even if she was deflowered a while back she’s still very pure and innocent so white is the perfect color for her.
I had never thought about this before but Slash is not only into bestiality but he’s also a pedophile man that’s kind of messed up in a way but Psymaiko is more mature than most humans in there twenties but still…
I couldn’t help but feel sorry for Watson I know what it’s like to lose the love of your life and to have only memoirs but at least he has them even if anything happens to them at least they’d have given him a few more happy memories because that is on of the best things you can give someone even after someone is gone from this world they’ll live on in the heart and souls of their loved ones.
The ceremony was heartwarming it was just so sweat it almost made me fall in love with sash because his lines were just so romantic and beautiful and touching but than Psymaiko had her say and it caused me to fall head over heels for her all over again.
And as for when the ceremony was over I just loved how Psymaiko was talking I love when she talks dirty there is just something about it that gets to in a special way…in my pants. But the actual sex scene that was just unfair I mean teasing her and us like that. No fair. I mean she was begging and rushing him to hurry up.
Of course it was well wroth the build up that was on of the best sex scenes I’ve read since well the last Sinners one shot it was so hot and passionate and loving I just cant describe exactly how it made me fell other than pleasant.
And the last thing I have to say is that when I first saw Sinners posted I thought it was going to just be some story about a guy having sex with a Pokemon which didn’t really appeal to me very much at the time but out of boredom I began reading it an it quickly become one of my all time favorite stories of all time I’m sure that even after the story is over and done with it will still entrain and inspire people for years.
I know that there’s no grantee of a happy ending in fact I except the ending to be fairly said but I still look forward to it and this story gives me some hope that maybe things wont be to bad after all is said and down.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Satoku---At least I was only late by an hour or so, heh. Glad you like it.
Imasuky Lomae---Most evolutions are planned for the main story, although not all.
The original plan for this stories involved a lame-ass idea about Slash and Arcanine fighting their way into a colony of Sableyes and stealing a diamond for a wedding ring to propose to Gardie with. Of course, this suffered from two key problems: (1) Gardevoir couldn't wear a wedding ring without attracting undue attention, and (2) the idea is fucking stupid, lol. So I just decided to scrap the ring, change the setting, and make the story go from just having the proposal to the actual wedding.
Hilariously, I did some research on wedding stuff for this story, and I learned that the idea that only virgins are supposed to wear white is bullshit. Apparently the white trend began with Queen Victoria, who only wore white because she wanted some lace. lols
I purposefully avoid mentioning Fallarbor except for that one reference because I wanted to keep the events there a secret (the same reason I didn't include Slash's sixth Pokemon in this story)...but the fact that it's mentioned about six months after the fact should be a sign that what happens there will be cataclysmic.
Purity is another of the major themes in Sinners---not in regards to virginity, but in personal purity; different key characters are at different levels of purity. Psymakio is perfect purity; Watson is mostly-redeemed; Slash is at the edge of light of darkness; Kiako is falling towards absolute darkness; Giovanni is beyond the light. The actions of the characters, and whether not they obtain redemption (or even desire it) is key to the story, whether in oneshots or the main storyline.
Watson did terrible things after his wife died, and he has suffered for his actions. However, after a lifetime of trying to redeem himself, he is finally being rewarded...he is no longer alone.
Heh, Slash will always love to tease Gardevoir like that. Why? Because the only thing better than a Gardevoir begging you to fuck her is a Gardevoir who is too turned on to say anything at all. :-D
Most people hear the basic pairing in Sinners---human and Gardevoir---and don't expect much. And yeah, I could have written a simple oneshot or multi-chapter PWP for Sinners, and I would probably have a shitload more hits. But it wouldn't be right. The story of Slash and Gardevoir falling in love, of Watson's redemption, of Magma and Aqua, of Kiako's fall and Giovanni's corruption...the story of Mewtwo's torment, the imprisoned Shadow, the fallen King...all of that HAS to be told. And I won't rest until it is.
Maybe everyone will die. It's a possibility...Sinners could end as a tragedy instead of a romance. But while I can't promise that I won't kill the characters off (my muse decides, not me), I can promise that I won't kill them off needlessly. All sacrifice will serve a purpose, even if that purpose fails to prevent the darkness prevailing.
Vyers---One of the most unusual aspects of writing this was trying to project personalities on the other Pokemon, as I haven't had time to develop them adequately in Sinners. That's why I kept Pokemon speech so limited---I don't really know where they're gonna end up. Their personalities will be much more refined and thoroughly-explored by the time we get to March in Sinners, heh.
Imasuky Lomae---Most evolutions are planned for the main story, although not all.
The original plan for this stories involved a lame-ass idea about Slash and Arcanine fighting their way into a colony of Sableyes and stealing a diamond for a wedding ring to propose to Gardie with. Of course, this suffered from two key problems: (1) Gardevoir couldn't wear a wedding ring without attracting undue attention, and (2) the idea is fucking stupid, lol. So I just decided to scrap the ring, change the setting, and make the story go from just having the proposal to the actual wedding.
Hilariously, I did some research on wedding stuff for this story, and I learned that the idea that only virgins are supposed to wear white is bullshit. Apparently the white trend began with Queen Victoria, who only wore white because she wanted some lace. lols
I purposefully avoid mentioning Fallarbor except for that one reference because I wanted to keep the events there a secret (the same reason I didn't include Slash's sixth Pokemon in this story)...but the fact that it's mentioned about six months after the fact should be a sign that what happens there will be cataclysmic.
Purity is another of the major themes in Sinners---not in regards to virginity, but in personal purity; different key characters are at different levels of purity. Psymakio is perfect purity; Watson is mostly-redeemed; Slash is at the edge of light of darkness; Kiako is falling towards absolute darkness; Giovanni is beyond the light. The actions of the characters, and whether not they obtain redemption (or even desire it) is key to the story, whether in oneshots or the main storyline.
Watson did terrible things after his wife died, and he has suffered for his actions. However, after a lifetime of trying to redeem himself, he is finally being rewarded...he is no longer alone.
Heh, Slash will always love to tease Gardevoir like that. Why? Because the only thing better than a Gardevoir begging you to fuck her is a Gardevoir who is too turned on to say anything at all. :-D
Most people hear the basic pairing in Sinners---human and Gardevoir---and don't expect much. And yeah, I could have written a simple oneshot or multi-chapter PWP for Sinners, and I would probably have a shitload more hits. But it wouldn't be right. The story of Slash and Gardevoir falling in love, of Watson's redemption, of Magma and Aqua, of Kiako's fall and Giovanni's corruption...the story of Mewtwo's torment, the imprisoned Shadow, the fallen King...all of that HAS to be told. And I won't rest until it is.
Maybe everyone will die. It's a possibility...Sinners could end as a tragedy instead of a romance. But while I can't promise that I won't kill the characters off (my muse decides, not me), I can promise that I won't kill them off needlessly. All sacrifice will serve a purpose, even if that purpose fails to prevent the darkness prevailing.
Vyers---One of the most unusual aspects of writing this was trying to project personalities on the other Pokemon, as I haven't had time to develop them adequately in Sinners. That's why I kept Pokemon speech so limited---I don't really know where they're gonna end up. Their personalities will be much more refined and thoroughly-explored by the time we get to March in Sinners, heh.