rate_review Reviews

I read and loved Chapter 1, but there was only one small thing I had issue with. I think it's made fairly obvious in the series/manga that Kitsune is experienced enough to not be a virgin. Correct me if I'm wrong, but that's just my opinion.

Great story nonetheless.

you should go and write more those were hot chapters

loved the new chapter. keep up the good work
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness

Going from past tense to present tense, and then back to past tense made the reading a bit confusing. I also wanted some more details in the scenes. As for the characters, they were alright, this is porn, after all, but some of the interactions seemed a bit too fast.

The sex scenes worked well. Again, a little fast for my tastes, but did their job.

I'm looking forward to whatever light incest you have coming up.

You will be adding one with Kanako right?

veery good stuff. it's nice to see some new stories.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness