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for L & B

by RiamtheWanderer

person Anon
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am confuses who B is and i have read death note and watched the anime
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I always think in my head that B is every murderous and calculating, but is love-y with L so I think it fits it seems like this sence belongs in a larger plot but it comes off well as just a one-shot. I' falling more and more in Love with L X B with each passing day... how tragic because its so uncommon.

Oh! Did my e-mail to you ever get threw, tell me if your gonna write one of my idea's or not, I just wanna know if you are, you can take a year to write the fic if you want but, I just don't like the idea of waiting to be waiting. Theres no point in having anticipation if you don't want to use any of my idea's, so e-mail me or something. ^_^
person animekid
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting but very very pwpish....the fact that B is on the bottom makes it worth reading.

The only thing I have an issue about is the age....BB was suppose to be near L's actually age and he seems kiddish in this fic. But besides that it was enjoyable

I wouldn't mind seeing more B and L fics :)
person qwerty2
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, it was certainly vivid. I felt a little out of the loop there (considering I have no idea what Death Note is about) A, B... Is there a C? Nevermind. It was messy (in the story) and I liked it despite the maddening tense changes. I especially liked the "wet popping noise". Brava. Typa Typa Typa.
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude, awesome. Personally, I loved it. L just leaves!? Dude, he's so lame. Bleh. Awesome ficcie though.

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