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Thats a really good story! I would like to see more soon. And... maybe some William x Seras? ^^° I dunno, that POV of him just seems inspireing for ***king Seras.
In either way, its a good one, and i hope you continue it.

I have to say, I really enjoyed this story. There were a few parts that seemed a bit over used but other then that it is definitely worth a read through. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Here comes your first critic.
Im afraid I found your OC a bit boring, nothing I haven't seen before. I think something you need work on is details, apart from editing that is. Is it Merffy or Murphy? I've never heard of Merffy.
Don't take this as sarcasm or cynicism or hate etc etc, but let me draw you a scenario:
Mr OC: "Hi, Im Mr OC, I have powers and I work alone"
Characters from the original series: "Oh wow look, its Mr OC, lets stalk/make friends with him"
Mr OC: "I dont think so, as Ive said, I work alone."
Cha(too long): "I implore you to reconsider"
Mr OC: "Hmm, okay. But before I do, because I just met you guys and I trust you completely, let me tell you everything about myself so I sound more cool"

This scenario I have seen it too many times and I only bought it the first time

great story,I a big fan of the hellsing series.I like to read more of this when you update it

love it can't wait to read more please update soon!

Wow - now it is starting to get much more interesting! I look forward to the next chapter and integra's reaction.

So far I really like this and I like the Vlad-acard look (why not have him looking like that a while). What pairings are you going to have? Just curious.