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I went and read the actual novel after you started this fic and you're moving along at a pretty good pace. XD
I don't even know if I should be saying this but I'm actually hoping that B would win. :P
*hee hee*
Ahrm, anyhow, do continue please. :D

AND WHAT ABOUT YOUR SAIYUUUKKII FIC? :(

Well done. Definitely got the flavor of the original. Thanks for all the hard work despite adversity. :)

hello, me again. heh heh, um, well...I guess I should start this thing off. *sigh* UPDATE ASAP!!! This is awesome! It's cool!! I want to know more!! I haven't even watched the movie!! (uh, some reason I thought you should know that)Please update soon. I enjoy reading your work.

Hmmmm...Never went and saw Star dust but now my interest is piqued to go rent it and see it to get a little more back ground info so i can understand the world that this takes place in a little better...T_T...Yeah that's pretty nerdish but i love to have a clear view of what the "universe" is for this fic....Anyway hmmm This feels pretty much like a set up chapter as stated i believe in the author's note. I feel as though this is gonna be a epic which is fine with me there aren't nearly enough multichaptered Death Note Fic's in my opinion. Also to find Authors that are as great as you writing them... feh those are few and far between...Fun Fact of FF my top authors include You, Nilahxapiel, and Duomi :) heh....Wow really off topic i'm sure i'm rambling but it's about 2:02 am so yeah Anyway i like the set up and can't wait for the next chapter :)....*Yawns Loudly blinks owlishly and moves onto next fic by chanceXIII*

O.M.G.
I think it’s about time that I dubbed you one of my favourite authors. O__o
You are absolutely amazing.
Granted the fact that I have never seen this movie that you have based your story off of, it is extremely interesting and I find myself loving how you’ve fitted all the DN characters into their respective roles.
L seems a bit emotionally roused than usual though who is to say that he isn’t beneath that blank exterior? XD As far as I’m concerned, L just does a good job in hiding it. HEE HEE.

Goodness, I really am loving the concept. Raito, a star – what a good pun. Hee hee. It took me a while to actually figure out what you were on about there… clearly, I just had to switch my mind into complete fantasy mode. But wow, just wow. *FLAILS*

On another note, I noticed two small grammatical errors in your story (I hope you don’t mind me pointing them out).
1) but the [b] animal’s [/b] are held by no such limits.
I do believe that you mean “animals” without the apostrophe?
2) [b] You’re [/b] father has named none of you as his heir
Again, I believe that you mean “Your”

Anyhow!
Argh! Please update this! And your other DN fic! And the Saiyuki one SOON. ;)

A pretty good start to this story. :)
look foward to reading more.