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This really made me shudder.

Full stop.

More please.

SWEET!! I love this!! It's awesome and I can't wait to read your next chapter! hahaha cool.

KYAAAAAA!!!!!! OH MY GOD!!!! UPDATE NOW!!! This is absolutely AMAZING!! I have never read anything like this!!! I LOVE IT!! God, and to think I was going to by pass this marvelous piece. *sigh* I really can't wait to see where you plan to take this. This idea is so original it has me captivated. This fic shows a lot of promise, and it has me excited for the next chapter. UPDATE ASAP!!!

Hey there!!

I am really enjoying this fic at the moment. It's different and it has really caught my attention. I like how you have approached it from a different angle and have kind of used diary entry dates to show different events and stuff.
Please continue - this is an awesome start.

Zanz.

Wow, this is such a fun fic.
It's a very original idea, and very well excecuted. It isn't often that one sees an interesting fiction around.
It's fairly well written too, and You characterise Light very well - his thought processes are very similar to the way he is in the anime.

Just one thing that ought to be pointed out, being tied up for that long would be pure agony: his limbs would start going numb after the first hour, and about three hours afterwards they would start throbbing.
Sorry, it is a pointless thing to nitpick, but she couldn't help it.

This looks to be far more interesting than anything I've read in ages.
Which is not to say, of course, that I lack interest in your other works... ;) Just that it's nice to be able to read a first chapter and not immediately know what's going to happen.

Whoa! That was amazing! I love this stories plot. I can't wait to read more.
=)

I don't know why but this feels Sort of like the 24 with that Sutherland guy as the star but obviously this doesn't just take place in 24 ours heh...So first off Yeah Raito being a creature of structure and habbit has got him in a bit of a bind ne? ...Mafia (shivers) i agree with Raito when he realizes how dire the situation is for him... Poor Raito's face they hit him in his face bastards *blinks* (realizes how shallow that last part was) *shrugs* at least there is no swelling. Not to bash Raito here but letting that sneer out (although totally him) was not the smartest move on his part and glad he realizes it to but a little to late to rectify that "miscalculation" :)...Anyway although i'm not a fan of graphic torture and abuse and what not i feel as though to completely comprhend this peice i feel it necessary to read it all. Not much can really shock or disgust me after all the Saw movies i've seen cause honestly from watching, *Spoiler warning if you haven't seen Saw or Saw 4, a man cut his own foot off to a guys head being smashed by giant ice cubes* and all the stuff in between i think i should be able to handle some Raito torture because hey i can simply invision L dieing in the Anime and feel a little rightness in Raito's pain but i don't believe there was mention of any death Note so he is just really an innocent bystander in this situation so hmmm...I'll just have to see what emotional attachments i form to the Raito in this story...so keep it coming... like the style and can't wait for the next part :).....*Double Checks to make sure reviewed all Stories by ChanceXIII nods head and promptly goes to bed*

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What is wrong with you? XD
It's just getting worse and worse. First, we have the sociopath, then stars falling out of the sky... and now international kidnapping and torture...?
*faints*

Goodness, you really do have too many ideas swirling around in that head of yours. ;D
Anyhow, wow, I am absolutely captured by this one as well. Although I'm not too fond the idea of Raito being tortured, I suppose it is necessary for the progression of the plot. D: Sighs. (L had better rescue him soon - haha)

Anyhow, another random mistake I picked up in the middle of your story (hope you don't mind):
"it purpose was made crystal clear." - I do believe you mean "its"?


Ok, I'm done for now. Please find some time to update the other fics too. XD (wants to read so bad)
:3

I love this story so far. It has a very promising beginning! I am looking forward to your next update!