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Could you please make them spend more time with the baby ^w^ she is just so cute~! I would also like to see what lavi's friends do when they see him and tyki together. Love the story by the way~!

You've been added to my recommended reading.

You grasp the mind brilliantly. You are an amazing author. And it is so amazing to find someone who... for lack of a better expression, GETS the English language.

I'm addicted!

Arguably one of the best LUCKY fics that I have the had the pleasure to read. There had only been two authors whom I had believed could truly take Tyki and Lavi and bend the characters to their will while also keeping them in character. I came on here looking for some good LUCKY fics, but what I found was absolutely amazing. I love how Lavi is the one who is now battling with his inner demons, so to speak; It throws my view of his sanity and true feelings into a whole new perspective: How DOES 'Lavi' function knowing that 48 different personas reside within him? How does he feel about not being able to...well, feel?

And Tyki...well there isn't much I can say about Tyki. I've always found his character particularly intriguing, and not just because of his looks or because he's the Noah of Pleasure. His willingness to keep his two contrasting 'sides' in his conscious mind always had me wondering about him; he seems pretty mysterious. And you're story adds more to the mystery (even if it's all fictional) because you provide a vulnerability to Tyki that most would probably never think about. What kind of MAN is Tyki Mikk?

I am most definitely looking forward to any new chapters. I hope you have't lost interest in this work or art (or Incubus) because I love it. Keep up the awesome work. :)

*fans self* wow that was some fantastic reading. And yes i would like more of this heehee you write such great lavi/tyki (my fav) the quality of writing makes me very happy and my favorite part? all of it

It sucks that you aren't getting the reviews you so obviously deserve, especially since the story is great! Nice long chapters, an interesting plot and seriously dangerous lemon (every chapter!!) -- I love how both lavi 'n tyki are, its simply perfect, and I really want to see what happens with the order now in the mix. Hope you get enough reviews to update again!

»adeusparaiso

You have an amazing gift with words, that's for sure! This entire fic was beautifully written. :)

And, it might not be exact or to the point, but I know the basis of what you feel. The lazy ass bastards on these sites are the entire reason I removed my fics throughout the years and is why I currently... absolutely refuse to post there or here ever again.

The fact that you went through it and still managed to keep your stories posted is admirable. You are very inspiring. Thanks you for the wonderful read. ^^

Take care.
May you have a wonderful day. ^^

Love your stories, keep up the good work!

Oh my god, it updated!

So, I tried to review this earlier, but it failed. I was so excited to read it that I stopped writing my own fic just so this would have my attention.

I love how you have their personalities play off each other and I like how they are both enthralled with that baby. Argh, I can't wait to see what happens when/if the Order finds Lavi. Oh the drama that will ensue. Keep up the good work, I would hate if my only Lucky writer stopped her stories because people won't review, people need to be appreciated after all the work they do!

Great Chapter,
SJ

Very pleased with this chapter, wonder what will happen with lavi's different personalities starting to seep into his current one. Who of the order will come to retrieve him? Honestly can't wait. PLEASE post soon. You have THE best LUCKY fic going on!

Your characterization --especially when talking-- of Tyki is SPOT ON. Even though I feel like I shouldn't want this pairing so much, I do.