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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
add and fav you? how? is there really a way? *looks at you with hope shining in my eyes* i love the story and hope you update soon. see i'm a fangirl that reviews. :3
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lavi's getting chummy with his other selves now is he. i hope it doesn't bite him in the ass later. please update soon. i hope they taki miki. it kinda fits in a wierd way. tyki mikk being the person that found her and all.
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay it's official, this needs a review XD (and more reviews too)
This. Was. SO. Adorable. I mean--REALLY. Tyki x Lavi (while not my favorite pairing) Can be quite enjoyable when written well, and you write it well. Definite kudo's to you XD
And by far chapter 7 was my favorite~ Why? Because of the Lavi-Tyki-Baby scene. I have no clue why, I normally dislike little kids in stories, but this fits. I can't wait to see what you do with it!
Keep up the great work!~ -claps-
This. Was. SO. Adorable. I mean--REALLY. Tyki x Lavi (while not my favorite pairing) Can be quite enjoyable when written well, and you write it well. Definite kudo's to you XD
And by far chapter 7 was my favorite~ Why? Because of the Lavi-Tyki-Baby scene. I have no clue why, I normally dislike little kids in stories, but this fits. I can't wait to see what you do with it!
Keep up the great work!~ -claps-
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. It's well written and sexy. I hope you continue, I'd love to read more.
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Well written, very developed, and your characters are very believable from what I remember of D. Gray Man. I hope you haven't abandoned it--do you happen to have a livejournal or someplace with more recent, more often updated writings?
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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know i should be working on my school projects now but this was really worth my time. It's not like you left me any other options since my brain was hooked up to the story all the time.
Love the roughness of the intimate scenes in the beginning and even when they get all gentle the whole thing still has its energy. The story too is really good plus i really like Lavi being all lost (the dream and multiple personalities) Tyki is cute too like this.
Wonderful writing.
Cant wait to see more :3
Love the roughness of the intimate scenes in the beginning and even when they get all gentle the whole thing still has its energy. The story too is really good plus i really like Lavi being all lost (the dream and multiple personalities) Tyki is cute too like this.
Wonderful writing.
Cant wait to see more :3
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO! New Nightmare Game!! ::dances around::
God, Dick-Lavi's... pushy. He's a dang pushy uke, he is. I feel kinda bad for poor Lavi, he's got 48 other teenaged boys inside him, all horny as hell. He's not going to have an ass left by the end of this story.
God, Dick-Lavi's... pushy. He's a dang pushy uke, he is. I feel kinda bad for poor Lavi, he's got 48 other teenaged boys inside him, all horny as hell. He's not going to have an ass left by the end of this story.
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing!!!! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, I hope to see it soon :D
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is only about the second D. Gray-Man fanfic that I've read. Yes, I do know that that is a rather... sad number to have read, but I just have never really been into the fandom with the passion needed to actually read much more. But let me say that I absolutely love your writing and this pairing. Though, I felt like an idiot because I had no idea what the meaning behind 'Lucky' was until I actually read this story...
By the way, you've made me fall in love with the whole rather dubious consent idea. I blame you for the plot bunnies that are now infesting my mind with their wicked and naughty ideas (but of course I will wind up listening to them in the end) for this pairing. It's my second favorite for the series. Oh, and I just thought that I should perhaps mention that a fellow author of mine (who should not be on this site at all), is cosplaying as Lavi this year with her best friend as Tyki. I'm rather envious that she has the time to do so.
*heavy sigh* I should be getting on with this review shouldn't I? Instead of boring you with my rambling... can't help it, this is why I tend to leave such long reviews... No one seems to mind however. But yes, anyways, back to your story.
I LOVE IT. Why isn't there a sixth chapter yet? It's been two months! I'd love to find out what happens next, and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. You do realize you are practically the entire reason that I am actually bothering to read the series, right? I read about the first three volumes, then stopped, now I'm reading as much of the series as I can! Love Tyki, he's just too awesome not to love. And Lavi's adorable too!
But what shall happen! And will the other characters be making an appearance anytime soon? They would have noticed Lavi's gone missing, right? I wonder... *evil thoughts dance about in her head* Well, I'll leave you with this review for now, do update soon.
Viridian Kat.
By the way, you've made me fall in love with the whole rather dubious consent idea. I blame you for the plot bunnies that are now infesting my mind with their wicked and naughty ideas (but of course I will wind up listening to them in the end) for this pairing. It's my second favorite for the series. Oh, and I just thought that I should perhaps mention that a fellow author of mine (who should not be on this site at all), is cosplaying as Lavi this year with her best friend as Tyki. I'm rather envious that she has the time to do so.
*heavy sigh* I should be getting on with this review shouldn't I? Instead of boring you with my rambling... can't help it, this is why I tend to leave such long reviews... No one seems to mind however. But yes, anyways, back to your story.
I LOVE IT. Why isn't there a sixth chapter yet? It's been two months! I'd love to find out what happens next, and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. You do realize you are practically the entire reason that I am actually bothering to read the series, right? I read about the first three volumes, then stopped, now I'm reading as much of the series as I can! Love Tyki, he's just too awesome not to love. And Lavi's adorable too!
But what shall happen! And will the other characters be making an appearance anytime soon? They would have noticed Lavi's gone missing, right? I wonder... *evil thoughts dance about in her head* Well, I'll leave you with this review for now, do update soon.
Viridian Kat.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gwah!?!?!? You just leave it there!? *cries* This is my absolute favorite story....EVER!!! And you're breaking my heart! You haven't updated in 2 months, missy! TWO MONTHS!!! What do you have to say for yourself!? *shakes finger at you* The wait id KILLING ME!! Slowly! *dies*
Please, please update soon! I absolutely love this fic!! It's brilliant!! *offers you flowers*
Please, please update soon! I absolutely love this fic!! It's brilliant!! *offers you flowers*