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tamingriki said:
Hey Untamedlady:
Still having problems posting your story?  Have you tried to e-mail Harial to see if she could e-mail you a step by step procedure to enable you to post your story?  Thats what I would do.  Let me know how that turns out.
Ciao!!
Author's Response:
Only on the other website, this one is ok...I'm kind of bummed, because I have no way of letting some of the people who were following the story know it's here. And I feel bad about it ya know?  I'm working on Ch.18, at the moment, so I hope to have that one finished soon. 
Thanx for checking in!
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04/04/08 - 09:02 pm
On: Chapter 17 Lords of Amoi

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tamingriki said:
Its me again!
Went to the slash archive and although the skin design is different I can see that there is still problems.  Like your story.  It shows only 16 chapters of the 17.  Whats up with that!?
Really, I'm just checking to see if you have chapter 18 out or still working on it.  Also, have you heard anything from Harial?
Yaoi House is now up.  However, when I checked my order that I placed last year, the billing and delivery address was wacko!!!  The billing address was Vilde Tee, Tallinn, 12917, EE. I live in Arizona!  So, my first thought was WTF!!!!!!  Had the dleivery asddress somewhere in Florida!   I immediately contacted the office via e-mail and updated my account.  Right now just waiting for confirmation that the billing and delivery information has been rectified.
Hope everything works out for Harial.  I know if it was me, I would be pulling my hair out and speaking jibberish.
May we all come out of this alive and intellectually intact!
Ciao!!
Author's Response:
LOL!!  Yes, every time I check to see if the site is up yet, I moan..  I'm trying to be patient.  Harial, I know is trying really hard to get it all together, so I will only have words of support for her.  As for CH.18, I'm almost ready to post, so soon ok?
Thanx for your support and patience...
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08/04/08 - 05:30 pm
On: Chapter 1 Lost Son

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leoandro said:
Hi! i just thought I'd drop by and say thank you to untamedlady for making this series available at this site, since kirafics.net have been reconstructed. I hope that a lot of your followers could locate this sister website to continue reading it. Your amazing description really made it easier for me to get the picture, like I'm watching all the events in front of me, especially the wild and steamy scenes. Ha! Ha! Ha! You really had my imagination working! Hope to read chapter 18 soon. Thanks again! =>

Author's Response: Thanx for the "HI" so back at you!  I'm pleased that you like my story, I've almost finished with Ch.18, and it's a bit long (longer than usual *smile*) because it's the final chapter.  I'm having a hard time letting it go, but oh well.  The scenes are indeed pictures in my head, so I guess my perverted side comes out that way (sweat drop!).  "See" you soon.
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10/04/08 - 07:13 am
On: Chapter 1 Lost Son

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tamingriki said:
After reading this chapter I get a niggling feeling that this may be the last chapter.  PLEASE, PLEASE tell me there will be just ONE more?  I am SOOOOOOOOOO addicted to this story.  Maybe some side stories perhaps?
Any whoo.  I was thrilled with this chapter as all the other 17.  You could definately take over some of Kira's unfinished stories. I'm just sayin'.
Looking to see more stories from you girl. 
             RIKI AND IASON RULE!!!!
Ciao!!
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12/04/08 - 02:21 pm
On: Chapter 18

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shilohin said:
Thank you very much for these wonderfoll story. I printed it out and bounded it, and now it will stay next to the original www-story from Taming Riki.  I really hope,  that you are able to write more stories. With great respect,
shilohin
Author's Response:
Sob!
Thanx shilohi...I don't know what to say.
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13/04/08 - 05:56 am
On: Chapter 18

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GiN said:
Untamedladyyy, i have missed your writing. It took me sometime to find out about this site. Anyway i am a happy toad, finally Riki and Iason are reunited and making beautiful music for real haha. The last chapter was a bit hilarious, when they were cruising back from Rhea, circuits, soap dispenser blowing up hihihi. Funny funny.
finally those creepy old dirty duschbags were cremated!!! And i am happy that Darius gets to join the Firm again, a lovely reunion between papa and son. 
I felt soo touched when those two walked out of their shuttle to give a speach to the aristrian citizens. My chest  grew tight and tears almost formed. It felt soo reall as if i was there listening to them two speak. HAhaha i think i was sooo immersed in your story that i felt such things. 
Anyway, untamedlady, i love your stories. Sad that it has ended, was a good and satisfying ending though. Would have loved more, with their parents and riki and Iason.,but i am content already. Cant wait to read more of your stories.   
Author's Response:
Thanx Rin!  You are most kind....I know there is more, but I'll be chewing on that for a bit.  This was a real e-ticket ride for me, so I'm pleased it entertained you enough for you to feel "immersed" in it. 
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15/04/08 - 08:35 am
On: Chapter 18

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tamingriki said:
Last chapter was GREAT!  There wasn't a dry eye in the house..including mine.  Love happy endings.  There are so few nowadays. 
May your Muse of creativity keep the juices flowing.
Ciao!
Author's Response: Thanx for the kind words, I really like happy endings too, or I'll lose sleep (wah!) later....
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20/04/08 - 02:31 am
On: Chapter 18 Still Waters

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Dark Angel
12/19/07 - 06:57AM 7: Chapter 7 A Distant Light Signed 
OH I HATE YOU TOO...FIRST I CRY FROM ANOTHER STORY I READ BEFORE THIS ONE...AND NOW YOU KEPT ME CRYING THOUGH OUT THE WHOLE CHAPTER.*smiles sadly...needs hug* But at least we now know what that myth about the FLAME was...." 'Riki, this is an ancient saying found on many of the walls at excavation sites at Menus Quentu it reads "The Flame will burn one's hands if held too tight" It is an old prophesy dating back to the dawn of Amoian Civilization. It simply means that when one's free will is taken, the flame of freedom will burn in one's heart.' " SO THATS THE MEANING AND WITH IASON CAPTURED IT HOLDS TRUE. But, this is what made my heart SKIP-A-BEAT..." ' This reminds me of you Riki, and how you have become this flame in my heart. I am both enslaved by you and set free because of my love for you. I could only hope you feel as I do' ".That just made me cry even more*needs another hug**sniffs* OH!!! AND WHEN THEY HAD SEX AND REACHED COMPLETION THIS HAPPENED...'Then Riki saw a flash of light in his mind's eye and saw himself standing on the edge of a cliff reaching after Iason who had fallen over'...HE SAW IT...SAW THAT IASON WILL SOON BE INTROUBLE. IASON ALSO SAW INTO THE FUTURE BECAUSE HE SAID THIS...' " Riki- I don't' know what just happened, I saw the halo and then found myself floating in a sea of darkness, then I heard you call me and I woke up".SO WHY IN THE NAME OF JUPITER DID THEY NOT HEED THOSE WARNINGS!!!! THE HALO WAS TELLING THEM OF THE THINGS THAT WAS ABOUT TO HAPPEN...NOW IASON IS GONE AND HE IS HEADED OFF TO GOD NO' WHERE...WITH PEOPLE WHO WE DON'T EVEN KNOW MAY MEAN HIM HARM. PLUS, WE HAVE A VERY PERVERTED DOCTOR WATCHING OVER HIM.*damn it if he lays a hand on Iason when he is laying comatose I'LL KILL HIM* Even though I said I hate you I STILL LOVE YA' TOO...this story is REALLY...REALLY GREAT, and I can't wait for chapter 8...needs to know if Riki's plan to use the Hot Springs to link with Iason will work...GOD I HOPE SO!!!!!*sending positive thoughts to Riki*
Author's Response: Hmmm, very perceptive my young padaone pupil....positive thoughts are flowing to Riki...stay tuned (smiles)
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21/04/08 - 11:37 pm
On: Chapter 7

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Dark Angel
12/30/07 - 01:39AM 8: Chapter 8 Waking Dream Signed 
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY....WHY DID IT HAVE TO END RIGHT THERE??? GIVE ME A BREAK YOUR KILLING ME*drops to floor dead* HOW COULD YOU BE SOOO MEAN*glares at you with daggers* YOU DO THIS ON PURPOSE TO TORTURE ME!!!!!*smiles* Riki he is right there talking to Iason trying to get Iason to come back out of his darkness. But, the real question is...is how hard is it going to be for Riki to accomplish this task??? Iason is in really...REALLY bad shape...much so that the people who has him had to put him in a coma just so he would stay alive. PLEASE...PLEASE...PLEASE put up the next chapter soon. LIKE TOMORROW WOULD BE REALLY NICE... NE???*gets on hands and knees* Till then BYE LOVE!!
Author's Response: Get your tissue ready... for more than just tears (smiles)

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Dark Angel
01/05/08 - 10:35AM 9: Chapter 9 The Tempest Within Signed 
YOU JUST MADE ME REALLY...REALLY...REALLY HAPPY!!!! PLUS THIS CHAPTER WAS NOT NEARLY LONG ENOUGH!!! BUT ON WITH THE REVIEW... o.k. I was so happy that Riki was able to get through to Iason.*big ass smile* And you were right I needed tissue was in tears during the whole reunion.*damn mind reader**smiles*Even though it took some time to convince Iason that Riki was indeed real and not another fabrication of his heart' wants. It broke my heart to see Iason in such emotional pain, having seen that Riki suffered for the injuries that he himself had. But Riki told him that thanks to the Hot Springs he is completely healed and that put Iasons mind at ease. And, they had MIND BLOWING SEX TWICE*squeals*to make up for lost time. needed tissue then to, just like you said. Now on to Petros and his memories of the first time he meet the than young Lord Mink. What did he mean when he told Iason that ' "The Flame will burn one's hands if held too tight...There is more to this proverb; however, we were unsure if you would be the one- considering your position on Amoi, and the fact that you are a Blondie" ' The one???The one for what??? *screams at top of lungs* what do they know??? And, then one of them said this ' "Armah leads all in the path one should walk, and he has seen fit to lead you to us; to this site for you to witness your future' " Future...are they talking OUT OF THEIR ASSES can't they be more clear!!! Did they expect Iason to just take their word on eveything they said. COME ON HE IS GOING TO QUESTION!!! *head hurts thinking too much* Back to present Darius and Victor...Victor has to be the most twisted,and perverted man alive. God he has to get his *ROCKS OFF* by watching his peers in the bath hall or in private quarters. Then he still has the nerve to look at Iason.*sees red* At least Darius put him in his place. Council of Elders...once again we are back to them. What could they possibly want with Iason that would warrent such extreme actions??? They better say that the world was coming to an end and, that Iason was the only one to save them. Cause this is just way to much!!! AS YOU CAN SEE YET THIS STORY HAS ME HOOKED, CAN'T WAIT OF CHAP.10... AND WHEN IT DOES COME UP I HOPE THAT IASON WAKES UP AND KICKS SOME MUCH NEEDED ASS!!!! neh.. till then bye love *smiles*
Author's Response: Wait- there's more...hmmm, Elders and Blondies and Pets oh my! Thanks for the review (grins)