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July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Review was transferred from the old eFics website.
ginton
03/27/08 - 06:37AM 16: Ch. 16 The Darkness of Rhea Signed
waaaaahh....you really got me stuck to your story. Such detailed mind blowing sexual scenes, historical, adventure, friends, colleagues and foes!! Really amazes me. So these bastards from Rhea are the culprits behind Iason's Agatha poisoning. Riki has really made a huge difference in character wise. From a naughty pet, always got something to complain with his foul mouth, changed into a wise man *nods*, no a Warrior with intellect!! Sounds sexy though hihih. His Temper i don't think that will ever get better . Before he would make such a scene to get everyones attention, now just one thought, he can kill some one just like that !!! Super cool. Sexual scenes was hilarious hehe, it was pretty funny to see cool Lord Mink to suddenly feel embarrassed and shy when being teased by Riki. And the scene where all the Elder clan watched their steamy sex was .....*drool*..... pooor Aristia Elders, but serves Rhea Elders right !! Still want to have Riki and Iason in their presence. They never learn....tsk tsk!! Got a question, i think you mentioned somewhere that the Firm and Elder clan are of pure blood. I am curious how do they breed. Did they undergo similar processes like Jupiter did ,cultivating cell tissues in tubes?? Cant wait to read the ultimate war chapter......imagining Iason and Riki unleash their power!!!
Author's Response: Wow...thanx for the review Ginton. Riki and Iason have come a long way in their search for each other. Now that they have been awakened to their lineage, their present "relationship dynamic" has forever, been changed. The Elders of Rhea kept breeding strictly among their own Clan, not mixing with the population, and keeping their inner powers hidden, compared to the Elder Class of Aristia who did, thus watering down their inner powers. The Firm's descendants from the Warrior Clans, like the Elders of Aristia, mixed their race with people of other cultures with all the travel they did among the stars, as they searched for the remains of the Intellects. Their inner powers were thus watered down. But once born into the Firm, you never left, because of their role as Jupiter's personal "maintenance men" and caretakers of the Intellects (Blondies). As for the cultivating of cell tissue...now that will be revealed in Ch.17. I appreciate the fact, you've followed so closely...I hope you enjoy the climax (no pun intended *smiles*
ginton
03/27/08 - 06:37AM 16: Ch. 16 The Darkness of Rhea Signed
waaaaahh....you really got me stuck to your story. Such detailed mind blowing sexual scenes, historical, adventure, friends, colleagues and foes!! Really amazes me. So these bastards from Rhea are the culprits behind Iason's Agatha poisoning. Riki has really made a huge difference in character wise. From a naughty pet, always got something to complain with his foul mouth, changed into a wise man *nods*, no a Warrior with intellect!! Sounds sexy though hihih. His Temper i don't think that will ever get better . Before he would make such a scene to get everyones attention, now just one thought, he can kill some one just like that !!! Super cool. Sexual scenes was hilarious hehe, it was pretty funny to see cool Lord Mink to suddenly feel embarrassed and shy when being teased by Riki. And the scene where all the Elder clan watched their steamy sex was .....*drool*..... pooor Aristia Elders, but serves Rhea Elders right !! Still want to have Riki and Iason in their presence. They never learn....tsk tsk!! Got a question, i think you mentioned somewhere that the Firm and Elder clan are of pure blood. I am curious how do they breed. Did they undergo similar processes like Jupiter did ,cultivating cell tissues in tubes?? Cant wait to read the ultimate war chapter......imagining Iason and Riki unleash their power!!!
Author's Response: Wow...thanx for the review Ginton. Riki and Iason have come a long way in their search for each other. Now that they have been awakened to their lineage, their present "relationship dynamic" has forever, been changed. The Elders of Rhea kept breeding strictly among their own Clan, not mixing with the population, and keeping their inner powers hidden, compared to the Elder Class of Aristia who did, thus watering down their inner powers. The Firm's descendants from the Warrior Clans, like the Elders of Aristia, mixed their race with people of other cultures with all the travel they did among the stars, as they searched for the remains of the Intellects. Their inner powers were thus watered down. But once born into the Firm, you never left, because of their role as Jupiter's personal "maintenance men" and caretakers of the Intellects (Blondies). As for the cultivating of cell tissue...now that will be revealed in Ch.17. I appreciate the fact, you've followed so closely...I hope you enjoy the climax (no pun intended *smiles*
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your work is excelent. I love how you describe the situation.
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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi it's DARK ANGEL, glad that you put it here. 'Cause I couldn't review on efics. Now, I can tell you that you almost gave me a heart-attack on chap.17 when Iason and Riki were fighting the Elders...man when they thought that they were not going to make it out I was biting my nails and pulling my hair.*smiles* Oh and chap.18 loved it but I have a question the way you ended it can make one think that there maybe a part 2, you know with Iason reanimating their parents. It would be great to have them together, to get back to the way it was. I would love to see what trouble they all can make. Think about it, neh!!! Well till your next project if any BYE LOVE