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by hawker748

schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, nice tie-in to your other story there, I couldn't help but laugh. Again, incredible work, and since I spent so much time singing your praises about your other story, I'll simply leave it to your imagination at how much I appreciate the good writing. Your use of commas could be a bit better, as most sentences don't tend to trail like yours, but again, I digress. Simply put, I can't wait for your next story.
person Cvinceus
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good pairing! The Shiro/Taiga pairing is quite interesting, aside from the Shiro/Saber pairing. You and F-1 are great authors! Keep it up!

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