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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a good one too but it was noticeable that it was your first of "Loveless".
Especially the first chapter ticked something inside me and I . . . the urge to write my own Fiction about this. Not really this theme but still my own.
I admid, I do not really like the idea of Risuka topping because I think it does not suit his charecter but I'm okay with it because in this story it fitted.
The iea of Soubi lousing the -I'm sorry but- not fitting name "Beloved" was great but I would have liked a bit more thought to it and I do not mean this offensive.
I would like to read a lot more stories by you.
Especially the first chapter ticked something inside me and I . . . the urge to write my own Fiction about this. Not really this theme but still my own.
I admid, I do not really like the idea of Risuka topping because I think it does not suit his charecter but I'm okay with it because in this story it fitted.
The iea of Soubi lousing the -I'm sorry but- not fitting name "Beloved" was great but I would have liked a bit more thought to it and I do not mean this offensive.
I would like to read a lot more stories by you.
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For the most part, very, very well written. There were a few bits I thought seemed slightly "younger" in tone ((where it shouldn't be)) in comparison to the rest of the work, but on the whole it's a marvelous piece and fits incredibly well with the anime and manga.
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that sucks that your story was initially deleted, i think i would cry if that happened to me 0_0
anyway i will review to try and boost the review numbers this wonderful ficcie deserves ^.^
I just finished reading whats up of 'shadows' and i loved this just as much ^.^ First off, aww, poor Zero boys, they are so mistrusted XD They were only trying to do whats best i'm sure lol. I dont know if you've done it on purpose or not but i like how you've given Soubi sophisticated language (or at least slightly so) and Ritsuka more simplistic words, it suits them more because of their ages ^_^ and even though Little Ritsuka's very mature he's still a kiddie lol. and i think thats what i love most about your Loveless stories, that you dont seem to forget there's an age difference, especially in this where ritsuka's like: "i want this and that" and soubi is the opposite almost and saying: "but you dont understand how important that is" It makes the shouta more justifiable, and completely worthy of Kouga Yun's work ^.^ Makes me kinda jealous lol. Your loveless stories kick mine's ass! :D This review is only for chappie one - i'm in the process of reading still XD But my favourite part so far is from "You heard what I said, Soubi. Take me..." onwards, because he's so bossy and brazen (very in character lol) and then just like he does in the manga he's suddenly realising what he's saying and he's like: "ah, crap, what am I saying?" and the ellipsis and broken sentences show that very well. A good ficcie so far and I'm off to read the rest now lol.
shigure-san
x chuu x
anyway i will review to try and boost the review numbers this wonderful ficcie deserves ^.^
I just finished reading whats up of 'shadows' and i loved this just as much ^.^ First off, aww, poor Zero boys, they are so mistrusted XD They were only trying to do whats best i'm sure lol. I dont know if you've done it on purpose or not but i like how you've given Soubi sophisticated language (or at least slightly so) and Ritsuka more simplistic words, it suits them more because of their ages ^_^ and even though Little Ritsuka's very mature he's still a kiddie lol. and i think thats what i love most about your Loveless stories, that you dont seem to forget there's an age difference, especially in this where ritsuka's like: "i want this and that" and soubi is the opposite almost and saying: "but you dont understand how important that is" It makes the shouta more justifiable, and completely worthy of Kouga Yun's work ^.^ Makes me kinda jealous lol. Your loveless stories kick mine's ass! :D This review is only for chappie one - i'm in the process of reading still XD But my favourite part so far is from "You heard what I said, Soubi. Take me..." onwards, because he's so bossy and brazen (very in character lol) and then just like he does in the manga he's suddenly realising what he's saying and he's like: "ah, crap, what am I saying?" and the ellipsis and broken sentences show that very well. A good ficcie so far and I'm off to read the rest now lol.
shigure-san
x chuu x
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is my review for the rest of the chappies. hnn, yummy lemons very hot XD i thought that the chapter 2's "what does this mean?" - "it means i love you" was really sweet ^_^ made me smile like a moron lol. I like how Ritsuka was a little teary about the loss of his ears too not because I'm evil but because its believable lol ^.^ anyways i like a happy ending - i'm a sucker for 'em lol. 5/5 with this story, you're such a loveless genius :D
shigure-san
x chuu x
shigure-san
x chuu x