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poor ritsuka, i hope he gets better. You had the teacher finally get someone. now she will not be mooning over soubi.

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WOW! Ritsuka even has me all hot and bothered. I think i need a lie down ;) I can only imagine what it is that Soubi is feeling!

Please more! I love the smut!

I'm reviewing because its fabulous and i know how it feels when you've got a good story that no one reviews -sooooooooooo....
i think the basis for the plot if very in character and theres definately potential for a few more chapters. i think you manage to keep the characters quite believable, especially with things like one out of the pair (mostly soubi) assuming for example that Ritsuka doesnt recognize his scent when he does lol. But anyway, you so have to keep going until theres full smut or i'll cry XD hn, i'm not very god and suggesting for others' stories since i dont know if there's a particular direction you wanna go with this... maybe do something where Ritsuka with his raging hormones touches soubi in his sleep probably not as boldly though lol. i think it would be cute if those bullies you mentioned were mean to ritsuka and maybe soubi helps him or something. Hn, otherwise not sure - either way i look forward to more chappies ^_^

shigure
x chuu x

i would be forever greatfull, if you did make this into a story story. it is starting off so good. and it would help with clearing up issues you've presented that a PWP would not.