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Waaahhh!!! You can't have stopped there. No, no, no, no, no, no, no. I'm about to shed tears over Ryoma's dilemma and there's nothing else. Nothing. Hopefully, this isn't a few years too late to encourage an update, ne?

Uhuhuh... . that you included them at the end xD. And I loved that it was Fuji turn, Tezuka was awesome in that chapter. And idea to use ice... brilliant xD.

Good ending to your story. I have to say that I did not like your story at first. The beginning was (in my view) very non-con and out of character for Tezuka and Fuji. I just don't see Tezuka as being a cruel person. Perhaps cold and aloof maybe but not cruel. Like I said it was just my take on it so after a couple of chapters I stopped reading it.

I saw you had continued the story so after a while read it all and liked it more. And I looked forward to the new chapters as you wrote them. I am not criticizing the story. It is just my personal opinion. I really do like the last few chapters the best. I think you did a very good job on the threesome parts. I also think the personalities got more on track at the end. I was sort of looking for Ryoma to confront Tezuka regarding Fuji's bruises. But that did not come around. Over all good story and I will look for the sequal if you write one.

KYAAAN did I read sequal? -celebrates- I love when stories finish because I love to see how it ends, but good stories like this I want more of, at the same time XD

Kyaaaan omg Tezuka's little speech about Fuji being dominated XDDDD kufufufufufufu and right to his face, too. -LOVES IT- That was so so so friggin hawt -dies-

I loved the comedic throw in with Eiji at the end XD he kinda deserves it but GAH what was he thinking barging in on them? I love when Tezuka stood up in like nothing and was still intimidating XD Atobe -hearts- but he feels a little lonely.

Gwen - it was the latest chapters of this fic that helped me finish that one shot XD I'd written almost all of it a while back but lost inspiration to finish, but then after reading that last delicious chapter -eyes sparkle- my muses came alive, if only for a moment. Arigatou!!! -slobbery chuus-

LOL pft, more than half my inspiration when it comes to smut is from some other fanfiction, doujin, something XDDDD there are very few original stories in the world. -excuse- XDDD

So friggib hawt I die just reading it -eyes sparkle- (This is y-chan btw, I've decided to totally switch to my L and C penname XD). OKAY I MUST READ ON NOW!! But I'm so happy because right now, everyone is happy XD LOL OMG Atobe's wonderful but pervy too. XDDDD

ch 14 & 15/ thank you for updating. I enjoyed the new chapters.

yuh... i made it but... just dont like threesomes. But it could be worse. You did a great job at the end because now I want next chapter because it'd be about Fuji ^^ (or them molesting him xD).

I pray to god and buddha and glory that there is a chapter 16, OMFG. (I never thought such a line could be such a painful cliffhanger XDDD) I have a million ideas in my head about what (I hope) they'll do XD but I am eagerly awaiting to see what your muses birth.

Gawd, the smutt is sooooo good, so hawt and sexy and smooth, and it never feels awkward despite the fact there's three of them, like with the scene where they all go home and masturbate at the same time. -awed- So gorgeous - and I love how you threw in the development with the activities, such as the cave (you've been caving before? -was very impressed by the detail- it sounds so fun). Atobe's a really good guy XD Hm, I wonder for how long Eiji'll stay clueless? Poor Eiji, he means well XDDD -sweatdrop-

:::fanning a very flushed face::::

OMG!!! That was SO hot. A tied down and incredibly eatable Tezuka.... and and The cavern scene with Atobe had me on the edge of my seat, and Ryomma and Syuusuke! WWeeeeee! FUfufufufu.

Please don't tell me it's gonna end here. there must be more. PLEASE????