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for There Comes a Time

by Gwenfarr

person yellow22
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you updated (ch 12 & 13). The last couple of chapters have been great. I look forward to your next update. PLEASE update soon! :)
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
D: Such a jealous Fuji. Makes me sad somehow (Tezuka *hearts*), and feel bad for Echizen. Hope they can get it worked out~ But deep down inside I'm like "just...no Pillar Pair. TezuFuji finally happened~" D:

Leave Seigaku?! D: Iyada~ That wouldn't solve anything, Tezuka~ D:

*off to read chapter 13* Must finish before I start writing my paper due tomorrow ><
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like Mieko. She's pretty cool. XD; Normally I'm not a big fan of OC charas, but you do a good job with her. =D

XD Those last moments = amazing. TezuFujiRyo-ness kept me amused~ XD
person masqatch
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
abghhh... i can't say a word. It's just that I hate when there are the three of them, but when I read your story it doesn't bother me so much. I really dont know why. Maybe it's just plain curiosity, because at the thought how it'd turn out my breath catches. xD. But still I prefer only the two of them, for me Tezuka and Fuji just fit perfectly each other. Can't wait xD.
person ychan
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You updated faster than I could read!! Crazy -loves it- I can't tell you how much I love this story, especially when Fuji agreed to let Tezuka date them both XD kufufufu -of course, yochan wants them to all date each other- Atobe is so awesome, I could totally picture him 'lifting one finger in salute' XD

Ok ok, now that I've actually finished, OMG THAT WAS SO FRIGGIN AWESOME - please let this story keep going, honestly it's killing me how good it is. And I just love the last few paragraphs, and I'm dying to know what Fuji said to Echizen. I love the drama and the angst and right now, it's such a happy moment, especially after all those moments of trauma (not that I don't love those parts too XDDDDD) I'm such a sucker for this stuff. GAH Please please pretty please with a nakey Fuji on top give us more?
person masqatch
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NO, no, no, no... I like Echizen, I really do, but I hate him when he's an obstacle between Tezuka and Fuji. But as you've said, there is a drama. You know how to build a tension. Mooou, I don't know if I can handle waiting for the new chapter ^^".
person ychan
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XDDD I love how Fuji already thinks of Tezuka as his gerogerogerogero

Very beautiful chapter, SO FRIGGIN HAWT, and did I see hints of Ryouma angst? -LOVES IT- Gah and I'm such a sucker for TezuFujiRyo -LOVES THAT TOO- I can't wait to find out where this new strand is going, especially after how sweet Ryouma was to try to help out Fuji. I wonder if he's processed that Tezuka was the one who slapped Fuji? Wah, Ryouma's hard to read! XD
person masqatch
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fuuuuuuuuuuh. I want them to be together, like this. Forever. I dont have to say that I loved it, do I? I still cant breathe... =].
person masqatch
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
But I hope that there is more than just a desire from Tezuka, the way he cared fo Fuji, it can't be just a desire xD. Fuji has to believe in him. But there has to be some drama xD. I love your story so much you can't even imagine. Thank you. And can't wait for a new chapter.
person Anon
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet, I like it. But then, this is what I strive for in my own PoT stories - even if there's some angst, a happy ending with love truimphant. That sounds horribly sickly sweet, doesn't it? >> Oh, well. That's the way I like it anyway. Thanks for writing this.

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