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for There Comes a Time

by Gwenfarr

person ychan
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-reviews as she reads, btw-

I loved the contrast between Tezuka and Fuji's 'cooling off period'. Excellent characterization of Tezuka, with him being the type to punch the wall when he can't stand it anymore.

OMG FINALLY THEY HAVE SMEX!! -cheers-

BOO Hanako!! -slaps her in Fuji's place- He shouldn't put up with that, he could totally get the cell phone from her if he wanted to. Grrrrr and now there's more angst with the cellphone -dies-

THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!! (Even though the cliffhanger is killing me)
person ychan
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fuji's inner conversation made me LOL. I love when he throws his hands up as he realizes Tezuka doesn't get himself. XD As expected of Fuji, to figure it out, though it doesn't help much. But at least this way, Fuji won't come to hate Tezuka (I was really afraid of that, though I believe Fuji's feelings are too long-term and strong and pure to fade so easily).

I love how Tezuka told Hanako to have some self-respect LOL XD that was the best way to break up with her, stupid witch.

XDDDD kufufu, Tezuka's so hentai - begging!Fuji is VERY smexy. I'm so happy Tezuka and Fuji talked a little bit, even if it was just a little, about Fuji leaving Seigaku.

I am SO waiting for all the Hanaka drama XD

(But I hope that by then, Tezuka and Fuji can fight it together.)
person masqatch
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that's awesome, i love it when tezuka is jealous. can't wait for new chapter xD.
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is GREAT! Please keep writing, and please make Fuji and Tezuka understand eachother 'cause I can't stand seeing them hurt. Keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An interesting and sexy take on Tezu/Fuji, and I have only one request. Please separate your paragraphs if you can, its very hard to read as is. But otherwise I like the story and the direction its going. -DL
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Totally Brilliant. More please! Quickly!
person ychan
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG SO BRILLIANT. -read the first chapter twice- I love the misunderstanding, and angry!Tezuka XDDDD Gah, he's so hentai, without even knowing it. Brilliant, with the way Tezuka tires him out, blackmails him, etc. I liked the line about Tezuka showing his control by being the clothed one.

I especially like how you build the angst, with Fuji seemingly cool and calm on the outside even while he's hurt and breaking on the inside (just like him), and the line about Fuji hoping for Tezuka's love but being hated instead -fangirls- XD I also like the line about games only being good when Fuji's in control. GAH I love all of it -mega hearts-

Great fic, very hawt imagery, especially that last part, Tezuka omg XD - I love how it backfired on him.
person ychan
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW omg, Tezuka's so sneaky AND clever. And I'm happy Fuji tried to fight back, I don't think he's so weak as to keep taking that, either. -loves-
person ychan
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kufufufufu XD But I have a feeling that just made things worse... at least this way, Tezuka will start to figure it out. MAYBE if that blockhead isn't too caught up in being mad.
person ychan
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was amazing XD ly hawt -LOVES IT- brilliant lemon. I love all the angst the misunderstanding causes, though it's painful, too. NYAAA please give us more asap, onegaishimasu!

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