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Hey I liked your fic, and I really like the couple L / Raito (Light), I love, especially when L dominates a Light, are so cute and hot, is so, thanks and kisses.

this was a really good fic. i loved the lemon and plot was awesome. it was just too cute!! i love lxraito, though it is very very done. but that's okay!! ^___^ anyways, great job, i loved the story to pieces!! also, i was trying to get to the bunny exchange you mentioned at the end, but i can't find it. if you could send me the address, i'd really appreciate it!~

This is just soo adorable!
Little quiz say wha? - I laughed my ass off! L is so cute!!! ^.^
So, yay! I loved your story (as well as every other story from you)! Im just bad at leaving reviews... and Iv read that you like getting reviews, so I hope this one will clear my consience (for awhile, atleast)
And while Im still here, I love (did you get that? I love, lovelovelove, NOT HATE!, L.O.V.E!) your story: This Black Lamb!! ^.^ Love the "reverse Raito"-idea, so... please update soon on that one, cause Im quite addicted to it!! ...and Im really looking forward to "Chance XIII - Deathnote story" ^.~
Well then, thanks for me! I will now draw back to my dark and comfy corner, quietly reading all the wounderful fanfics I can ut my hands on, till the next time, when I once again reach out and... leave a review... ^.^

That was TRULY wonderful. It really, REALLY was...

Normally I'm not one for AUs, BUT I'll take one for Death Note, especially when
I can get a scenario of Light/L being complete strangers as opposed to being
intense rivals with a Kira scenario. It kind of gets depressing after awhile.

Plus, a look at a First Date, Death Note-style was pretty entertaining and the
subtle humor was spot on. :-)

I laughed my ass off.
As silently as I could, as I was sitting in class while reading this.

Lovely story. I think you captured L and Raito (even though the manga says his name is LIGHT and not Raito, but I'm not gonna be ms. Nitpicky). It's hard to write them outside the Kira-setting without turning them into boring gary-stu's. But you did it brilliantly.

Kudos and thank you for writing a wonderful piece.

*wipes away a tear of laughter*
this is, without a doubt, the best Death Note AU I have read.
the first passage with L thinking about his toes had me hooked. XD

I think you got the character's personalities down to a T(though I have to say that Light throwing the cup of coffee...I did not see that coming at all...:3 nor L answering date/matchmaking quizzes. but I really really liked it^-^)

and kudos for the nice sex-scene. wery well written.

let me know if you ever write a sequel to this, or something down the lines of it so that I can read it
(not even Ruyk offering me the eye-deal for free if I don't read it will stop me)

One of the few longest oneshots I have ever read....AND I LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF IT!!! Damn I love long chapters/oneshots. They always feel as if they'll never end, and I love that. Thank you for being such an awesome writer!!! I look forward to reading more of you work!!

Beautiful. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this! I loved the humor and adored the Austen quotes. Wonderful, clean narrative and the lemon was very good indeed. Thanks for sharing!

Joie,
Gloria

Best Oneshot Ever.
She couldn't help but nearly die with laughter.

It was so well done.

I love this story!!! Very cute and funny :) I was reading your bio and I thought I would let you know that Roses For Red Eyes and Guiding the Dreamer look very interesting! But I'm especially looking forward to Chance XIII when you get around to it :) Good luck and please keep up the good work!