rate_review Reviews

Wow the was a very well thought out story. I loved how L answered the magazine questions. 'Hostess Factory' that made me giggle. I like that you kept the people in character. Very good job. I hope to read more of your works in the future.
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OMG!!!OMG!!!....THANK YOU....This has got to be the best story that has ever captured L and Raito in a none Death Note setting EVER!!!...I was in tears by the time i reached 'Little quiz say wha?' L eating with his feet i want to hug you at your brilliance in all things that L would probably do that he didn't do in the series....Let's see here wow haven't read anything by Jane Austen but now i have to the quotes were just so insightful that i want to read other works by her....Also the opening to this was a perfect setting of the stage for this story....Just i cannot express enough how good this was....I mean just wow...This was a beautiful one-shot-fiction that i will read over many times just because it is sooo amazing.....Just to be honest after reading the opening i began to clap really loudly in my house because just how much more powerfully can you open a fic with that's better than that? You and Nilah are by far the most talented Author's that i have ever read on this site and believe me when i say i have read thousands of them :) *glances back hmmmm...Do i really have a life...meh (shrugs)* Gladly give all of my free time to read works done by you (grimaces at the stalkerish quality)...ALso you have nothing to fear of lemons or anything else in that department it was well done and Hot XD... Anyway just once again thank you for this one shot and I gladly await uppdates on your other wonderful stories ^_^.

That was AMAZING! I think I love you! Honestly, lately I just keep reading such good DN fanfics, and they all seem to be coming from YOU! Keep up the good work girl! =D

& what a long, wonderful one-shot it is.

*melts into puddle*

Ok, I just want to say a few things after taking like an hour to read that.

1) That was just freakin' fantastic.
2) That made me smile in the strangest of ways... god, you wouldn't be able to turn it into a PDF file or something and send it to me would you? LOL
3) I think I'm distracted for the rest of the night.
4) I love you so much. D:
5) That story was seriously probable in the most ridiculous ways. In a way that only L and Raito can pull off.
Guh, that was just so good. So extremely good.
And the length of that was freakin' epic. haha.

P.S. I don't mean to be horrible or anything but I picked up quite a few grammatical and just typing errors during that story. o__O I didn't note down everything but I believe from recollection, you spelt skull as "scull" and wrote "waste" instead of waist somewhere.
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Just letting you know. Hope you don't mind. :)

Amazing story! I completely and utterly loved it. The lemon was great and the humor was also great. You have a wonderful sense of humor and you can convert it into words perfectly. Well done job with the dialogues! Are you sure you won't write another chapter? I'm kind of curios about Raito's parents' reaction, I know you specifically said it's a oneshot but... a girl can dream right? :P
Thank you for the read.

I'm going to be frank, I'm really not a fan of yaoi. Not because there's anything wrong with it (regarding homosexuality and all of that jazz), but because its so RARE that people can pull it off without sounding like they're immature youngsters who just learned how to put a condom on a banana.

But this...this was HILARIOUS. Most of the yaoi stories I see are more or less just a slapped-together sandwich of guys who'd never be gay for each other in canon and its FREAKY how out of character they are, but goodness. Both Ryuuzaki and Light were perfect. Their pairing just seemed so natural in this thing, so for that I applaud you. I also love how you accentuated Ryuuzaki's quirks even MORE, something I really didn't think was all too possible.

You have a great sense of humor too. I actually cracked a smile several times while reading this.

I love this sooo much, totally made my day. :D I look forward to reading more from you! :)
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That was by FAR, the quirkest romance...but not...story I have ever read.


I couldn't stop laughing. Brilliant depiction of Raito's and L's personality.

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