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Okay, so... uh. Hmm, how do I put this? Okay, so the blue cherries took hours to effect Tasuki, but almost immediately effected Chichiri? And, uh, I dunno if you've ever seen or experienced 69 position, but you didn't really explain it all that well. The only real hint was that both of them were blowing the other. Perhaps instead of saying that Tasuki flipped over (because that makes it sound like Tasuki put himself on the ground with Chichiri's dick in his mouth) you should have said something to the effect of "Tasuki scooted around, kneeling over Chichiri's face and silently asking for similar treatment."? That might have been easier to understand. ^_^

I did like this, just offering some concrit. Oh, last thing; blueberries are known to increase bloodflow to sex organs, but they aren't an aphrodesiac. They just help a guy get hard faster and last longer. ~.^

Ganbatte yo! ~Yahnkehy